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Anonymous
31st Jul 2012 7:37pm
What flow Red...hypnotic.
Strider :)
Strider :)
31st Jul 2012 7:41pm
31st Jul 2012 7:47pm
Yes do Strider. :)
Love this Gypsy how you have weaved it all together is wonderful. Excellent piece.
Love this Gypsy how you have weaved it all together is wonderful. Excellent piece.
31st Jul 2012 7:53pm
I am so glad you liked it Magda, tell your honey to take out to dance,lolol.
Red
Red
31st Jul 2012 11:54pm
Pass me a long drink of whatever you've been drinking today. You are pouring out the "mymymy" delights.
31st Jul 2012 11:56pm
Honey I wish I was drinking it might ease the... well lets just say it is a rough day.Thanks for the comment Ken.
Red
Red
As nervous as the wallflower is unto the dance we all must go, most commonly and there within tradition the gentleman’s excuse me?
The UK is hosting the Olympics this year. Involving all of those who choose with couch and HD TV to see and feel and gain a little insight within the judge’s eye that awards performance marks.
Presentation = Thought and use of graphics (out standing, the best I've seen within this place)10/10
Content = That of planning, editing and presentation of the finished piece 10/10
No reader who does dwell might award any other the less than a perfect 10. Our breath is taken our heads bowed in admiration.
I do not rush to raise my words in absolute salute. I think you deserve it for this nicely fitted jigsaw piece of girls and boys eternal hopes …. Loves dervish moment or the hidden depths of the trip and stumble stones that are the essence of corybantic malfunction
suffice to say well done +++
The UK is hosting the Olympics this year. Involving all of those who choose with couch and HD TV to see and feel and gain a little insight within the judge’s eye that awards performance marks.
Presentation = Thought and use of graphics (out standing, the best I've seen within this place)10/10
Content = That of planning, editing and presentation of the finished piece 10/10
No reader who does dwell might award any other the less than a perfect 10. Our breath is taken our heads bowed in admiration.
I do not rush to raise my words in absolute salute. I think you deserve it for this nicely fitted jigsaw piece of girls and boys eternal hopes …. Loves dervish moment or the hidden depths of the trip and stumble stones that are the essence of corybantic malfunction
suffice to say well done +++
1st Aug 2012 00:16am
You my dear friend gave me the best prize of the day, a HUGE smile. Thank you so much for the vote of confidence and the high score lolol you are the coolest.
Red
Red
2nd Aug 2012 10:56pm
I love the contrast between the sensuality of the dance and the formality of dialouge. So Victorian!
2nd Aug 2012 11:06pm
La eloquencia Y elegancia del idioma poético es impresindible." translate that sir, and see.
Thank you so much for the great comment glad you enjoyed my piece.
Thank you so much for the great comment glad you enjoyed my piece.
2nd Aug 2012 11:45pm
One of the things on our to do list when we both retire next year is for my wife and I to again take ball room dancing. We took lessons but then never went anywhere to dance - duh!
2nd Aug 2012 11:49pm
Did you translate? You can just dance at home when you are feeling frisky play some nice music and dance with her.
