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Writers Block.
Words like jump and hop leap off my page
whilst others like supine, languish in a state
of flat, along with sleep and smooth
scribble dribbles laterally from left… on through to right
not caring how it looks, or if it reads like shite
unlike eloquence, whose job it is to know
just what is meant when used with
fellow words, articulate and show
whilst others like supine, languish in a state
of flat, along with sleep and smooth
scribble dribbles laterally from left… on through to right
not caring how it looks, or if it reads like shite
unlike eloquence, whose job it is to know
just what is meant when used with
fellow words, articulate and show
Published 2nd Apr 2010
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Anonymous
3rd Apr 2010 7:47pm
and this poem seems to have been forged with the utmost care and attention. Clearly, a lot of genuine feeling has gone into it. The way you juxtapose a mention of the words “jump and hop”, “supine”, and “sleep and smooth” with “leaps”, “languish” and “dribbles”, respectively, was clever also.
28th Jul 2010 8:17am
thanks for the comment.
it's weird because this is one
of those poems that came easy. :)
it's weird because this is one
of those poems that came easy. :)
