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Metamorphosis
In those rough passionate hours as Diónysos and Nýx entwine
Two hollow wishful eyes leer at the unhinged star stained sky
Shambling soul, stagnant reflections, disillusioned perceptions
An eternal pandemonium, boulevard of nirvana or beguiling hallucinations ?
The theatre is a graveyard, buried with afflictions, nurtured by faith
Actors were dead, deceivers are born, amongst them believers stood torn,
Beliefs succumb to reality, questions divorce answers, lies choke desires
Broken, etched with scars, the heart walked away.. walked alone.. walked too far...
Two hollow wishful eyes leer at the unhinged star stained sky
Shambling soul, stagnant reflections, disillusioned perceptions
An eternal pandemonium, boulevard of nirvana or beguiling hallucinations ?
The theatre is a graveyard, buried with afflictions, nurtured by faith
Actors were dead, deceivers are born, amongst them believers stood torn,
Beliefs succumb to reality, questions divorce answers, lies choke desires
Broken, etched with scars, the heart walked away.. walked alone.. walked too far...
Published 27th Jul 2012
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27th Jul 2012 3:22pm
Even without knowing who these two are, their story is well-told. The commas made for breaks of emphasis while reading.. liked the balance and rhythm of it. A dark tale, yes. *thumbs up*
27th Jul 2012 5:12pm
Anonymous
28th Jun 2013 7:26pm
Very good! My favorite words are "lies choke desire". Such truth, it is hard to reveal our true feelings, just imagine if we found the courage just half of the time to tell our truths to people! Thank you for the write. Mike.
