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Insanity
She longs to pave
The roads with
Cadavers
Of her foes...
Body parts
Strewn;
Blood flowing amuck...
Pleas for mercy
From gurgling throats..
Drowning in their
Own blood,
Like how they've left
Her many times.
She was left to
Insanity..
Alas
She cannot
Leave a gift
Of carnage
For the
Saboteur is self
And the voices
Within...
The roads with
Cadavers
Of her foes...
Body parts
Strewn;
Blood flowing amuck...
Pleas for mercy
From gurgling throats..
Drowning in their
Own blood,
Like how they've left
Her many times.
She was left to
Insanity..
Alas
She cannot
Leave a gift
Of carnage
For the
Saboteur is self
And the voices
Within...
Published 26th Jul 2012
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26th Jul 2012 3:39pm
Fantastic write! Last seven lines - priceless. Wondering why it was marked for extreme content?
26th Jul 2012 7:37pm
Thanks, And Oh, my friend next to me said it was disturbing and most people would be freaked out by it :p
26th Jul 2012 5:18pm
26th Jul 2012 7:38pm
26th Jul 2012 8:03pm
it's not a bad poem but it needs polishing a bit. Remove the ellipses and the capital letter every time a new sentence starts.
26th Jul 2012 8:17pm
Sorry love, That's just how I write poetry, the capital letter with every new sentence, but I can do the other ^-^
Thanks for the advice <3
Thanks for the advice <3
