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What the perfect boyfriend would say..
I need you like a child needs there mother at birth,
i'd do anything for you because that is what you are worth,
I need nothing else but you as mine,
if you need a savior i'll be the first one in line,
sleep in my arms instead of my bed,
I love you to much , let's wait and not get mislead,
as we look at the stars above and beyond,
we relize that nothing could break our beautiful bond,
if you fall I will catch you,
if you cry I will to,
there's nothing in this world I would'nt do for you,
fate only knows the story of us,
i'll stay with you forever unless you put up a fuss,
your smile sends my soul sailing on a beautiful sea,
will you please do me a favor and marry me?
without you my life would be morbid and dark,
but your warm embrace gives my soul a spark,
when I dream of you I swear I smile in my sleep,
here is my heart baby,
it's yours to keep.
i'd do anything for you because that is what you are worth,
I need nothing else but you as mine,
if you need a savior i'll be the first one in line,
sleep in my arms instead of my bed,
I love you to much , let's wait and not get mislead,
as we look at the stars above and beyond,
we relize that nothing could break our beautiful bond,
if you fall I will catch you,
if you cry I will to,
there's nothing in this world I would'nt do for you,
fate only knows the story of us,
i'll stay with you forever unless you put up a fuss,
your smile sends my soul sailing on a beautiful sea,
will you please do me a favor and marry me?
without you my life would be morbid and dark,
but your warm embrace gives my soul a spark,
when I dream of you I swear I smile in my sleep,
here is my heart baby,
it's yours to keep.
Published 25th Jul 2012
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25th Jul 2012 00:41am
25th Jul 2012 1:10am
Anonymous
25th Jul 2012 2:56am
That was great and well put. Noone is perfect but your man should respect their woman. That was enjoyable.
It is a nice poem.However,a woman should respect their man too...it's a two way street ya know. Just so everyone knows....her profile is just a front. This woman,"Reanimate",is also spicey42,unklfestersnemisis and letitgo.Be wary of new memberships associating themselves with any of these names.She's been on here with many other screen names in the past too.She's friendly towards anyone who agrees with her but if you don't...watch out!Especially if you are a male.
26th Jul 2012 1:38am
26th Jul 2012 1:56am
Anonymous
- Edited 30th Jul 2012 3:00pm
30th Jul 2012 00:26am
The comment above by 13blueyes13 is incorrect. There is no front here, I enjoy this site. He has over 18 screen names and is vengeful due to a restraining order put on him due to death threats towards someone who was his ex and using her name under fake names as well, he lies about her on this site and hides behind different names. A very angry man with severe mental issues who does not know how to respect women at all, he has broken the order several times and he knows exactly why the order was put on him. He continues to attack since january. At this point none of her friends are putting up w it.She gets along great with men as he cant get along w women in a relationship. She has a huge ammount of friends who have her back plus some hear in dup who contact us and her via email. Just wanted to clear that up. Thank you!
