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HIS THOUGHTS...HIS WORRIES...HIS EVERLASTING STORY

His Poetic thoughts of pain emphasize the emotions running through his  mind
Happy but still hurting , when he reminisced about the days when he could say , "Damn, she is all mine"

Forever loved, always missed... just the tender touch of those lips
Had his mind gone to a perfect song...as she slowly moved her hips...

Engaged for days ..mellow by the hour..her insides he devoured...
The love was good..firm he stood..
but the thought of the pain that followed  soon made his senses sour...

We listen with our eyes and try to view with our ears,
when we have the general concept confused
Cuz within those lines...could you define..
the pain of a loved one being abused...

A message from the wise ..the words we despise...are the things we fear to hear...
He pleaded to her, "If you treat me the way i treat you, with honestly and loyalty, you will never need to fear"

Which seem to be words of the  weak,
but in her position, other women seek
To endure the things she received..
HE loved with all his might.. and held her oh so tight....
but the love taken for granted caused a break up she couldn't believe...

Demolished with pain..both lovers stood in the rain...as their time came to an end
He put all his trust in her..and she wanted everything to be done by him...
which made an equation of pain that would never end...

So it went from lovers, to mere friends,
then to "FUCK YOU, I DON'T WANT TO EVER SEE YOU AGAIN"
The wrong actions mixed with the most painful emotions can develop a devilish potion
That can turn all love into hate and demolish all commitment of pure devotion..

For the truth brings pain,
and lies keep you entertained..
the mixture results in childish antics in which all should reframe....

Because in order to overcome lust and find happiness
As adults...we should all reframe from the blame game
therefore, Love with your soul and not your mind...
and together your hearts will bind

No pointing the finger,
and let all worries slowly fade as they linger..
and your happiness would last for a lifetime
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