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The Eagle
freedom is to soar
across my celestial sky
of sapphire planes
courage is to spread
my wings over alabaster clouds
and float past the amber globe
strength is to sail
over my emerald sheets
and fearless indigo waves
loyalty comes when
my exquisiteness is admired
and my elegance revered
I am the monarch of the air
and conveyer to the gods
I am the Eagle.
Bald Eagle by Ray Morris
across my celestial sky
of sapphire planes
courage is to spread
my wings over alabaster clouds
and float past the amber globe
strength is to sail
over my emerald sheets
and fearless indigo waves
loyalty comes when
my exquisiteness is admired
and my elegance revered
I am the monarch of the air
and conveyer to the gods
I am the Eagle.
Bald Eagle by Ray Morris
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Re: The Eagle
20th Jul 2012 1:04am
I really like this. The Metaphors are amazing and your observation is wonderful. If I were to use an excerpt of this to say is my favorite, I would say its the whole thing.
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re: Re: The Eagle
20th Jul 2012 7:37am
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Anonymous
20th Jul 2012 1:33am
Just the loveliest poem....
Wonderful write and beautiful read.....
Wonderful write and beautiful read.....
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re: Re: The Eagle
20th Jul 2012 7:38am
Thank you a bunch Kitty, I am so glad you like it! :)
Thank you for stopping by!
Thank you for stopping by!
Re: The Eagle
Anonymous
20th Jul 2012 1:51am
Beautiful in flight this poem!
Strider :)
Strider :)
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20th Jul 2012 7:38am
Re: The Eagle
20th Jul 2012 2:07am
I've considered horses to be the most majestic of animals. I've only seen an eagle a few times. You bring forth the deserved title of eagles as "monarch of the air"
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re: Re: The Eagle
20th Jul 2012 7:40am
Thank you Ken. I have only seen them at the zoo's. I think there are many majestic animals, horses, elephants, and eagles. Thanks for stopping by. :)
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20th Jul 2012 5:13am
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20th Jul 2012 7:40am
Re: The Eagle
20th Jul 2012 7:17am
Is it eagle? Though I think it's more fitting to an osprey. :P
"I am the monarch of the air
and conveyer to the gods"
This was a beautiful summary to an elegant description. Nice work.
"I am the monarch of the air
and conveyer to the gods"
This was a beautiful summary to an elegant description. Nice work.
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re: Re: The Eagle
20th Jul 2012 7:36am
Check this out: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qSGpjz92194&hd=1
I guess they are similar though. The Bald Eagle is our national bird. :)
Thanks for your compliments :)
Very much appreciated!
I guess they are similar though. The Bald Eagle is our national bird. :)
Thanks for your compliments :)
Very much appreciated!
Re: The Eagle
20th Jul 2012 10:42am
Oh so beautiful baby girl. I love it. Very inspiring and uplifting.. Quite a change from the norm. I love it. I was wondering if you could do something for me.. I would love for you to resit my poem Sickest form of starvation. if you have time.. I love your voice and the way you read. pretty please, let me know..
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re: Re: The Eagle
20th Jul 2012 11:38am
Thanks Devilish. I appreciate that.
Well, of course I can make time for you. I am honored that you asked. :)
Give me a couple of days and I will do that for you! :D
Well, of course I can make time for you. I am honored that you asked. :)
Give me a couple of days and I will do that for you! :D
Re: The Eagle
Anonymous
31st Jul 2012 6:12am
The amber globe, I've not heard that description but thats why i like it, it's original.
The sun shining on the clouds I assume. Maybe wrong...
Are the indigo waves the mountains or hills?
Nicely done with describing each sight.
The sun shining on the clouds I assume. Maybe wrong...
Are the indigo waves the mountains or hills?
Nicely done with describing each sight.
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re: Re: The Eagle
31st Jul 2012 6:27am
Thanks Autumn, you are right all the way around. So glad that you stopped by with your kind words.
Appreciated :)
Appreciated :)