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One Night's Virtual Kiss
Words on a screen,
is what you are comprised of;
you are a mystery to my mind,
coming like a dream so sublime.
For so long my body has been barren,
a desert, parched of tenderness and passion.
My desires emaciated, have become a memory.
The longing solidified my heart, a cold stone,
but my dreams I could not reign in or control.
The woman I am has dominion,
her desires would not be denied
even if the moment is ephemeral.
My ambient liquid dreams are a
vivid image of loving, feeling
you caress me as if I was fragile.
Slow, purposeful, you castigate my body
with your control, intent on igniting passions
long forgotten, my ardor rising from the
ashes like a phoenix; you wear a wicked grin,
the knowing displayed mmm…,
amative actions extract illicit responses.
The many things I want, I hunger for,
kisses in all my sensitive places,
you to hold me fiercely in your arms,
yet tenderly; squeeze me as if fearing
I will fade from sight; let our lips meet
tenderly in every conceivable way.
Seduce me as if it means the world to you,
artfully caress the design of my body
record it in your mind, the whispers
of ecstasy only you can imagine to hear,
Taking me to the brink with your
digitally written foreplay making me
feel timid yet full of undeniable wanting.
You tease and entice, arousing
a carnal appetite that demands
appeasement; you fantasize finding my soft spot,
trailing kisses down my neck nibbling tasting,
mmm… my will is now a slow, slow train wreck;
oblivious of anything other than the imagined
feel of you, the cascades of sensations that
you have awakened, virtually via the imagination.
Gypsy Red
7/2012
is what you are comprised of;
you are a mystery to my mind,
coming like a dream so sublime.
For so long my body has been barren,
a desert, parched of tenderness and passion.
My desires emaciated, have become a memory.
The longing solidified my heart, a cold stone,
but my dreams I could not reign in or control.
The woman I am has dominion,
her desires would not be denied
even if the moment is ephemeral.
My ambient liquid dreams are a
vivid image of loving, feeling
you caress me as if I was fragile.
Slow, purposeful, you castigate my body
with your control, intent on igniting passions
long forgotten, my ardor rising from the
ashes like a phoenix; you wear a wicked grin,
the knowing displayed mmm…,
amative actions extract illicit responses.
The many things I want, I hunger for,
kisses in all my sensitive places,
you to hold me fiercely in your arms,
yet tenderly; squeeze me as if fearing
I will fade from sight; let our lips meet
tenderly in every conceivable way.
Seduce me as if it means the world to you,
artfully caress the design of my body
record it in your mind, the whispers
of ecstasy only you can imagine to hear,
Taking me to the brink with your
digitally written foreplay making me
feel timid yet full of undeniable wanting.
You tease and entice, arousing
a carnal appetite that demands
appeasement; you fantasize finding my soft spot,
trailing kisses down my neck nibbling tasting,
mmm… my will is now a slow, slow train wreck;
oblivious of anything other than the imagined
feel of you, the cascades of sensations that
you have awakened, virtually via the imagination.
Gypsy Red
7/2012
Published 19th Jul 2012
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19th Jul 2012 8:28pm
One I imagine we can all relate to. You captured love in the cyber world perfectly.
A wonderful write Gypsy. :)
A wonderful write Gypsy. :)
I am thrilled that you could relate this piece, I think if you have been on the net long enough you'll have at least one encounter that leaves you flustered. Thanks for the visit.
Anonymous
19th Jul 2012 8:46pm
I concur with Ms. Magdalena...and can totally relate.
Well done Red Gypsy....!
Strider :)
Well done Red Gypsy....!
Strider :)
19th Jul 2012 9:19pm
Anonymous
19th Jul 2012 10:04pm
The virtual relationship has an advantage over a real relationship. First you never really see each other so there is less of a sense of insecurity than in a real relationship. It can go on through time and space barriers - for example...if you are flirting with someone in Australia.....that is a 24 hour trip from the USA and you may not ever meet easily. Finally, if this is an online affair....do the ten commandments really apply.
Thank you for a beautifully written, thought provoking poem.
Thank you for a beautifully written, thought provoking poem.
19th Jul 2012 10:57pm
I agree 100% yes maam hahahah. Thank you for the comment, too cool for school.
20th Jul 2012 2:01am
What a decadent, lekker delight. Amazing how our minds can affect our bodies so powerfully without a touch.
20th Jul 2012 12:58pm
Yes indeed, don't you know.... just one of those odd things that defy explanation.lolol Thanks for the fun comment.
20th Jul 2012 9:34pm
23rd Jul 2012 6:41pm
Dear Friend this is awesome, fearless and brilliant.
My double gosh, I doubt I ever read a more honest open hearted piece than this. Amongst those of all your words … (fragile) and (fearing I will fade from sight)ring out …. Your muse of verse must be applauded and for the rest of us most envied. If only all of poetic words might know how This writer (such as he) did write such words to move you so
My double gosh, I doubt I ever read a more honest open hearted piece than this. Amongst those of all your words … (fragile) and (fearing I will fade from sight)ring out …. Your muse of verse must be applauded and for the rest of us most envied. If only all of poetic words might know how This writer (such as he) did write such words to move you so
22nd Jul 2012 1:27am
(feeling sheepish) lol Thank you very much my dearest friend, I am glad you approve and the it was to your liking.Your opinion is highly valued.
25th Jul 2012 8:21pm
You have a much more positive spin on the subject than I did on a similar topic. This was a powerful and moving piece.
25th Jul 2012 8:39pm
Ohhh I could have easily projected the negative aspect of it I have had my share of realy bad ones it is more common and prevalent; but I chose to stay positive, hope springs eternal I guess... Thank you for the comment and the kind words.
2nd Aug 2012 11:51pm
Again I love the contrasts - physical sensuality with virtuosity. I love that you focused on the positive, don't ever stop.
2nd Aug 2012 11:54pm
I believe very much in the juxtaposition of things, they seem to work in harmony that way.
Thank you for the positive Feed back, Mark :)
Thank you for the positive Feed back, Mark :)
