Scorpio's Revenge

It takes a lot to write a three lined poem. It has to capture the reader within three lines and build a real story in, again, three lines. You've done this. This is great, and it obviously has depth beyond what's really written there. Excellent :)

Thanks Sublime ... Haikus are my favorite form of poetry (most of my postings here are Haikus). I like to think of them a poetic sushi! Glad you enjoyed it.

Oh! So it's a haiku!
I didn't notice because most haikus suck.

I have to agree with you ... most of the one's that I've read do suck.