Haiku - Weep

Wonderful.  It includes everything in the only time we have: the moment.  And how often I miss it (the present moment) thinking something must get done.  As the silence screams:  I'd better start listening.  It seems you can see/hear what is right in front of you.  Thanks for giving me hearing/sight.


marcella1

I am glad you enjoyed this humble piece, a few can often speak volumes. Thank you for your comment.

Yes, more please.

Strider :)

Hahah I did not know you liked Haikus so much Strider, I have a few more coming and some old ones all ready here at DU if care to read them. Thanks


http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/37437-haiku-the-worm/


http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/43361-mine-haiku/

Speaks volumes, always the moment, silence is a captivating place.... A wonderful Haiku.

So glad you liked it, thank you so much!

How touching a piece is when the comments are wordier than the heartspeak.

A vivid picture in just a breath. Wonderful.

Thanks Mr.Ken glad you like it. Your very gracious.

less words and just as much said. It makes you think this Haiku. Brevity being and enviable mode that gives this much

It is part of the Japanese discipline "less is more"
Thank you very much sweets.

Very nice Gypsy.
I really enjoyed this

That's great, glad you did.Thanks for stopping by.