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Tickle My Nose
One cold frosty night I met a cute lass
With obvious skill she caught my pass
Her fair skin so soft, as cool whipped cream
With eyes so blue she seemed like a dream
Pretending to be a sweet innocent
While inside she desired ravishment
When my lips met with hers for a kiss
Her smile revealed what I could not dismiss
Desire shown in her fiery hair
Like burning flames being blown through the air
We went to the bar and drank a few drinks
She said, "Let's go to bed, this place stinks"
Out in the car I massaged her round breasts
It wasn't hard to get her undressed
She came prepared wearing no underwear
With one unzip her body was bare
Hard nipples awaited my delicate touch
No augment of pleasure seemed too much
Never had I felt such silky smooth skin
I couldn't hold back and dived right in
This girl knew more than I did at her age
She said "This car feels like a bird cage
We've got all night, let's go back to my place
Where I can stretch out and sit on your face"
Was no resisting her whisker biscuit
And I'd go as far as she'd permit
Then she dared me to take more than my share
And tickled my nose with her soft muffin hair
All that teasing really loosened her hips
She went down on me and straddled my lips
It's hard to believe a girl so young
Could do the things she did with her tongue
Over she rolled and spread her thighs wide
The inches instantly multiplied
Two now consumed in continuous climax
Non-stop passion with no time to relax
With the grace of a woman at her peak
And sexual style purely unique
She blurred the line between love and desire
Charring my heart with her ungodly fire
* 12/21/1985
I could swear I posted this before, must be my old age getting to me...
With obvious skill she caught my pass
Her fair skin so soft, as cool whipped cream
With eyes so blue she seemed like a dream
Pretending to be a sweet innocent
While inside she desired ravishment
When my lips met with hers for a kiss
Her smile revealed what I could not dismiss
Desire shown in her fiery hair
Like burning flames being blown through the air
We went to the bar and drank a few drinks
She said, "Let's go to bed, this place stinks"
Out in the car I massaged her round breasts
It wasn't hard to get her undressed
She came prepared wearing no underwear
With one unzip her body was bare
Hard nipples awaited my delicate touch
No augment of pleasure seemed too much
Never had I felt such silky smooth skin
I couldn't hold back and dived right in
This girl knew more than I did at her age
She said "This car feels like a bird cage
We've got all night, let's go back to my place
Where I can stretch out and sit on your face"
Was no resisting her whisker biscuit
And I'd go as far as she'd permit
Then she dared me to take more than my share
And tickled my nose with her soft muffin hair
All that teasing really loosened her hips
She went down on me and straddled my lips
It's hard to believe a girl so young
Could do the things she did with her tongue
Over she rolled and spread her thighs wide
The inches instantly multiplied
Two now consumed in continuous climax
Non-stop passion with no time to relax
With the grace of a woman at her peak
And sexual style purely unique
She blurred the line between love and desire
Charring my heart with her ungodly fire
* 12/21/1985
I could swear I posted this before, must be my old age getting to me...
Published 7th Jul 2012
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7th Jul 2012 2:59pm
Repetition of this poem is worth it, anyway, poetryman, that was a passionate piece...youthful eagerness. The 80's was a rolling roar, Beat it and Eye in the Sky. And Boy George...
Thanks for commenting Grace!
The 80's were a dark time, starting with Ronald Reagan and John Lennon getting shot and the wrong one surviving. Everything after that was a disaster, in life and in music. That's when depression got a hold of me and nearly killed me 6 times over, so I quit going to bars and drinking and thought life would get better.
This particular poem was about a night at a bar that had a connecting parking lot with my apartment house in our respective back yards. The back door of the bar was about 44 feet from my back door where I was living with my then ex-girlfriend, who I also wrote several of the poems posted on here about from the 83-84 time period. Those were strange days indeed!
jj
The 80's were a dark time, starting with Ronald Reagan and John Lennon getting shot and the wrong one surviving. Everything after that was a disaster, in life and in music. That's when depression got a hold of me and nearly killed me 6 times over, so I quit going to bars and drinking and thought life would get better.
This particular poem was about a night at a bar that had a connecting parking lot with my apartment house in our respective back yards. The back door of the bar was about 44 feet from my back door where I was living with my then ex-girlfriend, who I also wrote several of the poems posted on here about from the 83-84 time period. Those were strange days indeed!
jj
8th Jul 2012 1:22am
Well, I saw a rainbow of light in the 80's, but the clouds had no silver lining, only shadows where the darkness lurked. There were many good things in the 80's, in fact, music started out very promising in the early 80's, but Punk and New Wave dried up too quickly and the crap that took over until the 90's made me disgusted. It became an outragous-fest, whoever was the most flamboyant got the most attention, and as far as I'm concerned, art suffored terribly in favor of popularity. Greed was the driving force of the 80's in America, which seems to happen every time there is a Republican President. Nixon in the 70's, Bush from 2000-2008. Then when we try to fix their destruction, they whine like a bunch of spoiled brats because the only way to fix what they broke is with the money they ripped off from everyoone who wasn't busy being greedy while they got rich. Republicans are still trying to preech Reagan's trickle down effect to fix the economy they ruined in the 8 years Bush used Republican strategies to put us in the worst recession since the great depression. At least President Obama cares and at last we have Obama Care! jj
