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Fluidity
I drink the sounds from your lips,
words that are the elixir of my life
and nourish my soul.
I breathe in every word,
assimilating the symbolic value
of the faint vibration of your lips.
I feel a desire welling up inside of you,
flowing like the waves of the ocean
and I dive into the sea of your essence.
Exposed, the soft silk flower garden,
in the tropical heat of love,
delicately opens petal by petal,
I sip the dewdrops of your dawn,
the spring sap rising eagerly
to tremble under the suns rays
Wrapping yourself like an Oyster,
polished by the friction of my passion,
you become an unblemished pearl
I am a castaway on your honeydew lake,
immersed in the rhythm of your tides
drowning in the fury of the senses.
Crashing over the pristine reef
the flood consumes life
leaving only the little death
waggy 07.07.2012
words that are the elixir of my life
and nourish my soul.
I breathe in every word,
assimilating the symbolic value
of the faint vibration of your lips.
I feel a desire welling up inside of you,
flowing like the waves of the ocean
and I dive into the sea of your essence.
Exposed, the soft silk flower garden,
in the tropical heat of love,
delicately opens petal by petal,
I sip the dewdrops of your dawn,
the spring sap rising eagerly
to tremble under the suns rays
Wrapping yourself like an Oyster,
polished by the friction of my passion,
you become an unblemished pearl
I am a castaway on your honeydew lake,
immersed in the rhythm of your tides
drowning in the fury of the senses.
Crashing over the pristine reef
the flood consumes life
leaving only the little death
waggy 07.07.2012
Published 7th Jul 2012
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7th Jul 2012 1:03am
These words swept over me like a warm ocean wave:
"I sip the dewdrops of your dawn" and I am a "castaway on your honeydew lake,
immersed in the rhythm of your tides
drowning in the fury of the senses"
simply amazing.
"I sip the dewdrops of your dawn" and I am a "castaway on your honeydew lake,
immersed in the rhythm of your tides
drowning in the fury of the senses"
simply amazing.
7th Jul 2012 5:57pm
Thank you so much, darling K, it is taking me a little time to get back into writing anything submittal and so your compliments are extremely encouraging.
My love and gratitude
D xx
My love and gratitude
D xx
7th Jul 2012 1:24am
7th Jul 2012 5:58pm
Thank you so much, dear, for taking the time to read and to comment so positively on this - it is so encouraging.
Love and gratitude D x
Love and gratitude D x
Anonymous
7th Jul 2012 1:24am
I agree with Firebyrd......
this poem is just wonderful to read
made me feel good all over....
this poem is just wonderful to read
made me feel good all over....
7th Jul 2012 6:00pm
Thank you Kitty, for taking the time to read and to comment in such a positive manner. I had a slight hiatus and am struggling slightly to get back to writing anything at all readable.
My love Dave x
My love Dave x
11th Jul 2012 7:58am
