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Your eyes
Your eyes,
so blue,
yet so unique,
only found on you.
I love them,
they swallow me,
through the crystal whirlpool,
into the deep sea.
Why are eyes,
compared to stars?
Stars can't comprehend,
how beautiful yours are.
I don't mean to be rude,
but I would love to gaze,
into your eyes,
for days.
They are,
so beautiful yet
amazing, no wait,
perfect.
so blue,
yet so unique,
only found on you.
I love them,
they swallow me,
through the crystal whirlpool,
into the deep sea.
Why are eyes,
compared to stars?
Stars can't comprehend,
how beautiful yours are.
I don't mean to be rude,
but I would love to gaze,
into your eyes,
for days.
They are,
so beautiful yet
amazing, no wait,
perfect.
Published 3rd Jul 2012
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3rd Jul 2012 3:00am
3rd Jul 2012 3:01am
Anonymous
3rd Jul 2012 10:55am
This poem is small but carries a strong message."Only found on you" tells everything. For the poet they are unique among other million eyes. And the eyes are a mirror to the soul and one of the most beautiful things on a human body. The poet asks "How are eyes compared to stars?" And the answer is simple... because they are lights in the night sky, because they reflect what is going on in a person's mind...
It's a beautiful poem.
It's a beautiful poem.
3rd Jul 2012 7:38pm
