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Among Friends
You handed them the tools to excel and transcend. When their filled with hesitation. This doubt you'll suspend.
Going to any lengths to prepare and defend. Until the day, they cross you. And refuse to make amends. Taking the bond you thought would last forever.
Bringing it to a bitter end. Forcing you on the defensive, because against you they must contend. And you teach them a lesson that forces them to comprehend.
That they should never make enemies of those they still need as friends.
Going to any lengths to prepare and defend. Until the day, they cross you. And refuse to make amends. Taking the bond you thought would last forever.
Bringing it to a bitter end. Forcing you on the defensive, because against you they must contend. And you teach them a lesson that forces them to comprehend.
That they should never make enemies of those they still need as friends.
Published 2nd Jul 2012
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27th Dec 2012 3:09pm
Short, sweet, and universally relatable(from both sides). The format is unique and seems experimental. It leaves the final thought of each paragraph as the first sentence of each new paragraph. I like the format and its good to see variety in style although im not sure if its the best format for this.
Good job.
Good job.
