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Perspicacious
Slivers of the day
Broken shards of time
Remnants of your essence
Linger on my soul
Daydreams fashion
Merge Our union
Cherishing the moments
Tokens of time
No responsive realization
Content to mind the bliss
Sharing fragments
Of natures kiss
Wordsworth and Cummings
Whisper in the wind
Breathing thoughtful breath
Food of our Souls
Broken shards of time
Remnants of your essence
Linger on my soul
Daydreams fashion
Merge Our union
Cherishing the moments
Tokens of time
No responsive realization
Content to mind the bliss
Sharing fragments
Of natures kiss
Wordsworth and Cummings
Whisper in the wind
Breathing thoughtful breath
Food of our Souls
Published 27th Jun 2012
| Edited 28th Jun 2012
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27th Jun 2012 7:11pm
28th Jun 2012 00:28am
27th Jun 2012 7:51pm
Soul_Man_Ken
liked the way you have structured skillfully...short segmented lines yet reveals massive in clear refreshing imageries! Loved this n thnnk you fr sharing
uma~
liked the way you have structured skillfully...short segmented lines yet reveals massive in clear refreshing imageries! Loved this n thnnk you fr sharing
uma~
28th Jun 2012 00:29am
27th Jun 2012 8:24pm
Sometimes less is more, as in your words here, beautifully placed with much depth. :)
28th Jun 2012 00:32am
27th Jun 2012 10:44pm
28th Jun 2012 00:33am
Anonymous
27th Jun 2012 11:13pm
Wordsworth and Cummings
Yes Soul man...I get it.
Strider :)
Yes Soul man...I get it.
Strider :)
28th Jun 2012 00:34am
28th Jun 2012 00:46am
Short, sweet and beautiful
the only thing I want to add is the spelling of your title, I believe should be, "perspicacious"
other than that, you strung these words together beautifully :)
the only thing I want to add is the spelling of your title, I believe should be, "perspicacious"
other than that, you strung these words together beautifully :)
28th Jun 2012 00:53am
28th Jun 2012 2:12pm
29th Jun 2012 11:53pm
