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Glacial entropy star petal dictating the umbrage centripetal osculation of cot
Melt construction micro thorn passivity thus lit external stillness in woods
Gelidity demise god dirt-seed direction if black core rotation under cellar
Flame erecting insecticidal sky chaos for pallid eternal stop is heaven
Glacial entropy star petal dictating the umbrage centripetal osculation of cot
Melt construction micro thorn passivity thus lit external stillness in woods
Gelidity demise god dirt-seed direction if black core rotation under cellar
Flame erecting insecticidal sky chaos for pallid eternal stop is heaven
Published 27th Jun 2012
| Edited 3rd Jul 2012
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27th Jun 2012 8:10am
hey, the good thing about this experiment is, i can read it upside down or backwards and it makes just as much sense line to line. [:
but it looks like the first word of every line relates directly to the on below it, second words to second words, etc... do you think you could make the pattern clearer? i like the relationals, but i didn't really like reading the lines as they lay. either way, good to see someone playing with words. [:
but it looks like the first word of every line relates directly to the on below it, second words to second words, etc... do you think you could make the pattern clearer? i like the relationals, but i didn't really like reading the lines as they lay. either way, good to see someone playing with words. [:
27th Jun 2012 1:09pm
me either!
Now today class I want you to tell the story of Jesus using only the letters G and R...
Now today class I want you to tell the story of Jesus using only the letters G and R...
Anonymous
30th Jun 2012 7:41pm
I found it :)
Gelid is a fantastic word, with awesome connotations.
Your stream of consciousness is intriguing!
Ok. I'm going to re read a few times, then reply again. Maybe I can be constructive then.
Gelid is a fantastic word, with awesome connotations.
Your stream of consciousness is intriguing!
Ok. I'm going to re read a few times, then reply again. Maybe I can be constructive then.
3rd Jul 2012 3:34pm
it's now the third. it's been edited.
i wonder if you read it a few times. i didn't read it at all, till now.
it's an ongoing experiment. i could continue this for the rest of my life - 20 volume set
i think i may delete most of it and leave the initial experiment. then repost it. fugit, i'll do it now.
i wonder if you read it a few times. i didn't read it at all, till now.
it's an ongoing experiment. i could continue this for the rest of my life - 20 volume set
i think i may delete most of it and leave the initial experiment. then repost it. fugit, i'll do it now.
