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Be me
Remedy me,
The ills of thee,
Vanquished hope, return; my plea.
Wrap me,
Inside of thee,
Copying shimmers, help; shine free.
Mirror me,
My pain by thee,
Both crying aloud, your eye to see.
You be me,
I crave to be,
thee,
So you walk my wasteland,
As I dream I’m free.
The ills of thee,
Vanquished hope, return; my plea.
Wrap me,
Inside of thee,
Copying shimmers, help; shine free.
Mirror me,
My pain by thee,
Both crying aloud, your eye to see.
You be me,
I crave to be,
thee,
So you walk my wasteland,
As I dream I’m free.
Published 11th Mar 2010
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11th Mar 2010 6:51pm
I love your use of words and the structure of the lines.
It really hit me where a poem should!
Great job!
Louise x
It really hit me where a poem should!
Great job!
Louise x
