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My Home
Up in the attic
A place I call home
It seems quite creepy
But my phone doesnt roam
I dont bring many up there
Unless I know they can handle it
Because it's a place like no other
I must truly admit
Children used to play up there
A long time ago
So I could tell the first time I was up there
That I wasnt alone
See, there were problems with the air
Up there, back in the day
So something happened to the children
On there very last play
I can even hear
Their footsteps down below
They scatter throughout the night
Making everyone here know
So now up in the attic
Where dusted mirrors are wide
I have a few friends that want me to die
Says the scar on my left side
A place I call home
It seems quite creepy
But my phone doesnt roam
I dont bring many up there
Unless I know they can handle it
Because it's a place like no other
I must truly admit
Children used to play up there
A long time ago
So I could tell the first time I was up there
That I wasnt alone
See, there were problems with the air
Up there, back in the day
So something happened to the children
On there very last play
I can even hear
Their footsteps down below
They scatter throughout the night
Making everyone here know
So now up in the attic
Where dusted mirrors are wide
I have a few friends that want me to die
Says the scar on my left side
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Re: My Home
13th Jun 2012 4:19pm
I've been in your attic...its not that scary haha
I love the poem doh:)
I love the poem doh:)
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13th Jun 2012 4:21pm
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13th Jun 2012 4:23pm
It wasn't too bad....I mean it could be more terrifying...
And your welcome
And your welcome
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13th Jun 2012 4:25pm
Haha...you were up there when I took Kat! I remember then lol
It wasnt bad then...
...It has gone worse though...
It wasnt bad then...
...It has gone worse though...
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13th Jun 2012 4:28pm
Once when Kat was there
Once after we got down and got on the roof
And once we got up there and then well we had to get down
Once after we got down and got on the roof
And once we got up there and then well we had to get down
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13th Jun 2012 4:34pm
Oh...
The last time shouldnt count cause well I opened the door and we had to go
So you didnt go up there that time :P
The last time shouldnt count cause well I opened the door and we had to go
So you didnt go up there that time :P
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13th Jun 2012 4:36pm
No I mean like we got all the way up there and had to get down
The time you are referring to is the last time I was at your house...
The time you are referring to is the last time I was at your house...
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13th Jun 2012 4:39pm
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13th Jun 2012 4:40pm
Its okay..I mean your brain did explode and relocate to your boobs so I mean its not your fault....I'll remember for you:)
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13th Jun 2012 5:00pm
You lightly punched me...you said stand still...and I didn't wanna cause I thought it would hurt...:P
And yeah you did tickle me O.o
And yeah you did tickle me O.o
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13th Jun 2012 5:02pm
It was so light, i wouldnt call it a punch dear....
More like a love tap hahaha
More like a love tap hahaha
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13th Jun 2012 5:06pm
You know I love you....even if your brain got confused and moved into your boobs haha
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13th Jun 2012 5:41pm
Okay this is my final comment on this poem...we can move to mine:)
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13th Jun 2012 4:24pm
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