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Dont just stand there (Collaboration with Glenn Mcrary and skinnyjean

 He stood aghast as one piece of me faded
Into the gaping ungrounded perfection;
An untouched sound,
Which was once you an I,
But to scared to say it,
Part two of me fades,
Dissolved in salt water,
temperature dropping,
I'm drowning and choking,
Whilst he's just watching,
As the wounds created by you,
stop trying to heal,
Never did you stop to think how I'd feel,
After both parts one and two, what was left of me was gone,
I was lucky to have found a third chance,
Whilst you kept me down
He was waiting to save me
Written by i_like_blue_eyes (Cutedarkandcuddly)
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