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Forgotten Or Unwanted?
Would you come comfort me,
Would you cry with me,
If you knew?
What would you do,
Or would you do anything
At all?
If you could've
Seen how I was
Yesterday,
A hopeless disaster..
But there's no point in thinking
About yesterday...
If only I could run away,
I feel forgotten and
This has gone on
For so long..
Am I forgotten,
Or just unwanted?
Would you cry with me,
If you knew?
What would you do,
Or would you do anything
At all?
If you could've
Seen how I was
Yesterday,
A hopeless disaster..
But there's no point in thinking
About yesterday...
If only I could run away,
I feel forgotten and
This has gone on
For so long..
Am I forgotten,
Or just unwanted?
Published 10th Jun 2012
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10th Jun 2012 12:22pm
11th Jun 2012 5:03am
10th Jun 2012 3:05pm
11th Jun 2012 5:06am
This is a beautiful poem, the flow is breathtaking. It reminds me of so many heartbreaking times in my past when I moved alot and lost connection with those I loved. This piece is going into my reading list. I'm a new member, feel free to stop by and comment/critique a couple of my poems for me? Thank you
AlwaysCaliban
AlwaysCaliban
11th Jun 2012 5:07am
11th Jun 2012 5:39pm
11th Jun 2012 8:14pm
13th Jun 2012 2:34am
Well Done!!! Short but empowering. Emotions are just plainly detailed and the flow is beautiful. Do more of this please.
13th Jun 2012 5:05am
Thank you love <3... I'll try to do more of poems similar to this ^^
13th Jun 2012 6:20am
13th Jun 2012 6:36am
