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TRUE LOVE
True love knows no difference,
Its purity cannot be compared.
Genuine love asks no questions,
But shine within its correction.
Sincere love dreams no reward,
Its fruit is certain forever.
Love is not held until it is freely given.
Its passion will melt the frozen heart,
for which it abounds.
Giving love surpass its utterance
in strides of gracious assurance.
Wear your love and scatter it beyond
your imagination.
Its purity cannot be compared.
Genuine love asks no questions,
But shine within its correction.
Sincere love dreams no reward,
Its fruit is certain forever.
Love is not held until it is freely given.
Its passion will melt the frozen heart,
for which it abounds.
Giving love surpass its utterance
in strides of gracious assurance.
Wear your love and scatter it beyond
your imagination.
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Re: TRUE LOVE
11th Jun 2012 3:34pm
Nice piece. It really got me with the line
Love is not held until it is freely given
Such a good choice of words and used so well, that is oww so true!
peace
Love is not held until it is freely given
Such a good choice of words and used so well, that is oww so true!
peace
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re: Re: TRUE LOVE
3rd Jul 2013 6:07am
Decided, thank you for reading and sharing your comment. Indeed, love is a gift to share/given.
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18th Sep 2012 1:09am
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re: Re: TRUE LOVE
3rd Jul 2013 6:11am
Gabriel, your honest feedback is greatly appreciated. True Love is powerful - it overcomes negative resistance and break down stubborn walls.
Re: TRUE LOVE
25th Oct 2012 5:06pm
True love is felonious… You take someone’s breath away… You rob them of the ability to utter a single word… You steal a heart.
Oh how I love this poem! :-)
Oh how I love this poem! :-)
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re: Re: TRUE LOVE
3rd Jul 2013 6:14am
"T", thank you very much 'for your gracious comment. Sorry for the late response to your feedback.....like with love, "better late than never."
Re: TRUE LOVE
26th Nov 2012 11:55pm
fluid and real. punctuation over-load!!!!!!! all CAP'S too!?!? one or the other! or a dash of both. find the balance n your thought's reveal even more... keep grindin
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re: Re: TRUE LOVE
3rd Jul 2013 6:20am
Thank you for reading and commenting. Your great feedback is very much appreciated CAOS737
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Anonymous
30th Jun 2013 00:21am
Deep.
I like this alot!
I like this alot!
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re: Re: TRUE LOVE
3rd Jul 2013 6:21am
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Anonymous
3rd Jul 2013 2:05am
Beautiful description of love. Enjoyed! :)
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3rd Jul 2013 6:04am
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3rd Jan 2014 11:15pm
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Re. TRUE LOVE
10th Jan 2019 7:47pm
Through great love and passion anything is possible. Well written and beautiful; a wonderful poem!
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