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Reality
Feeling so bare like a tree stripped of its leaves
with the sun beating down on me with an intense glare
that burns to the core
No more mellow whiskey days
to hide my shame and despair
dry from the inside
I can't even get off to take away my pain
my clit hangs heavy with dew
though I can't take myself to that place anymore
Drunken sex with no inhibitions
just rough and hard
down and dirty
Raw feelings have taken their hold
I can't seem to shake them
missing with all my heart my drunken haze
I'm wanting to see daylight
without it burning my skin
tender and scorched
No more rivers of beer to armor me
it's said there is nobility in sobriety
I haven't felt it yet
Right now i'll I feel is the sting of reality
with the sun beating down on me with an intense glare
that burns to the core
No more mellow whiskey days
to hide my shame and despair
dry from the inside
I can't even get off to take away my pain
my clit hangs heavy with dew
though I can't take myself to that place anymore
Drunken sex with no inhibitions
just rough and hard
down and dirty
Raw feelings have taken their hold
I can't seem to shake them
missing with all my heart my drunken haze
I'm wanting to see daylight
without it burning my skin
tender and scorched
No more rivers of beer to armor me
it's said there is nobility in sobriety
I haven't felt it yet
Right now i'll I feel is the sting of reality
Published 7th Jun 2012
| Edited 16th Jun 2012
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Anonymous
7th Jun 2012 9:11pm
Unveiling (crimsin),
That is one hell of a sting you are laying yourself bare to! Your delivered me there; feeling low for that place you can not take yourself to anymore. Enjoyed with a grimace!
tornado
That is one hell of a sting you are laying yourself bare to! Your delivered me there; feeling low for that place you can not take yourself to anymore. Enjoyed with a grimace!
tornado
8th Jun 2012 6:27pm
ty Tornado yes I felt bare writing this..glad you enjoyed..I grimaced too leaving this up..peace Crim
7th Jun 2012 11:08pm
8th Jun 2012 6:28pm
Lovely Gg you make my mine spin with you intelligence and beauty..ty peace Crim :)
7th Jun 2012 11:21pm
Girl....My poetic hat is off to you...
the honesty and pain that was evident in this...
is what makes it so beautiful
keep pressing..the light...
is right around the corner!
the honesty and pain that was evident in this...
is what makes it so beautiful
keep pressing..the light...
is right around the corner!
8th Jun 2012 6:30pm
ty beautiful lady for such a lovely comment..this was a hard poem to leave posted..wishing you peace Crim :)
8th Jun 2012 5:26am
So raw and well expressed. Reality is hard to deal with at the best of times! Stay strong
8th Jun 2012 6:31pm
17th Jun 2012 1:56am
Well written. I liked the third and seventh stanzas. 'No more rivers of beer to armor me' was particularly good
17th Jun 2012 7:02pm
22nd Jun 2012 8:09pm
Kinky and then the crash and burn the morning after eeeuuuuwww lol very nice Crim.
Gypsy red
Gypsy red
24th Jun 2012 9:47pm
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