Every fucking cliché

Bluntly tolled and well put. Fucking cliché is it. I'm sure they have all been told. Great vent.

It's all rather sudden :) I think you might want to have different criteria for a 'good' wife!

Well at least you know what you're getting I guess! :D

Fucking someone you love dearly isn't really 'dirty'. But it makes it more exciting if you find your partner is trying to be available in every way to please you. And it is even more exciting if you find they are taking the trouble to understand how you work, and start doing things to heighten your excitement, such as delaying and teasing just the right amount, or taking notice of clues of what is happening for you, such as breathing, sounds, and throbs in your genitals. So submission is very sexy, and complicity in the pleasure goals is even more sexy. Why not go with what works? Don't you get a thrill for you out of giving him such a good time? Why have we got to understand everything? Fucking someone is not supposed to be like writing a thesis. Fucking ought to be a symbol of a deep, sublime love, but during the act it has its own, more primitive and basic rules.

It does have primitive basis rules, but I compulsively attempt to attribute meaning to everything!

Written on 5th June 2012 12:02pm. Last modified on 5th June 2012 12:04pm by philosopher
Fucking someone you love dearly isn't really 'dirty'.

Nicely put. :)

I think any healthy male will be unable to read your poetry without jacking off, so I think you must have encapsulated how the mechanism works. The poem expresses the feeling someone has, that so much is working wonderfully, yet there must be more than this. Perhaps in another poem you can explore what this greater thing is and where you find it. I don't think one should despise the instinctive pleasures, and maybe two people will only continue to want to fuck intensely when a lot of the other things are already going right. We aren't made of wood, and we aren't automatons, even if the mood of the age makes us feel we have to claim to be one.

Wow wow wow wow wow! Love the title, love the poem, and absolutely loved the sexyness about it, even though they were cliche! Well done!

We like to think of ourselves as aethereal beings, experiencing some deep, everlasting love and devotion, but the fact remains that inevitably our love channels itself through things as simple and physical and transitory as some much desired fetishes and a pair of orgasms. This is why people often don't like talk about sex: they cannot help their recurrent urges, but they don't like to be reminded - in words - of the fact. They want to experience it but without vocalizing it. It isn't the words that are crude, but the way our bodies work. A fuck is not profound, but the life accompanied with much needed fucking is. In this condominium there is much happiness and love and peace, nurtured through much fucking, much being practical, much being available, and no longer playing tease.

Shut up and Fuck me!! You've already figured out how to say what I want you to say..lol

Cliche or not, you've touched me. :)

Wow.
LoveLoveLove.

I can honestly say that this threw me for a loop after I started reading! Nice.