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Analysis
Social drinker, yet problem boozer,
Gambler yet compulsive loser.
Very loving fucking bastard,
More like a sentence then a hazard.
Looking out but seeing in,
Guess I know where to begin.
Gambler yet compulsive loser.
Very loving fucking bastard,
More like a sentence then a hazard.
Looking out but seeing in,
Guess I know where to begin.
Published 2nd Jun 2012
| Edited 11th Jan 2015
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1st Aug 2014 3:31am
Thisisme, luv. :-* ~
This poem is pretty incredible. You've put so much depth of meaning into it. The self-reflection is a profound piece.
Technical change: looser to loser and that's all.
This is truly crafted well, luv. :-*
This poem is pretty incredible. You've put so much depth of meaning into it. The self-reflection is a profound piece.
Technical change: looser to loser and that's all.
This is truly crafted well, luv. :-*
