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A brief lesson on one-upmanship
sweat soaked
arched back,
screaming
with your hot cum
dripping from
the corners
of my mouth
and
somehow
you think
you
won
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Re. A brief lesson on one-upmanship
Well post-nut-clarity is a thing, so looking at this snap shot, probably not at this point…..
But revenge lingerie has an approximate battery span of 4.5 hours, and I don’t think I’m turning it off, now that your distraction is gone, it’s time for me to play some more…..
But revenge lingerie has an approximate battery span of 4.5 hours, and I don’t think I’m turning it off, now that your distraction is gone, it’s time for me to play some more…..
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Re: Re. A brief lesson on one-upmanship
2nd May 2025 9:37pm
Re: Re. A brief lesson on one-upmanship
Yesterday 8:40am
What if I put it back together gently with my tongue 😛?
Or even my hands I’m quite skilled at putting things together…
Or even my hands I’m quite skilled at putting things together…
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Re: Re. A brief lesson on one-upmanship
Yesterday 00:39am
Oh! Ok! Yes!
No, wait, no!
We should do a mock clitoral breakage. No actual damage should occur to said clitoris, but you should show me how you’d fix it with your hands and tongue!
Re. A brief lesson on one-upmanship
2nd May 2025 10:44pm
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2nd May 2025 11:00pm
Re: Re. A brief lesson on one-upmanship
Yesterday 8:39am
Re. A brief lesson on one-upmanship
Yesterday 1:43am
They think every happy ending makes them a winner, but what runningturtle said. Totally.
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Re: Re. A brief lesson on one-upmanship
Yesterday 2:29am
Re. A brief lesson on one-upmanship
Yesterday 6:16am
Your responses to each poems are awesome (I just read Nevermindthegaps poem)
"and
somehow
you think
you
won" > I sense a little sarcasm here though I can be wrong.
Love this piece, my friend (early morning smiles here)
"and
somehow
you think
you
won" > I sense a little sarcasm here though I can be wrong.
Love this piece, my friend (early morning smiles here)
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Re: Re. A brief lesson on one-upmanship
Yesterday 00:40am
Thank you darling!
A wee bit of sarcasm. 😇
I appreciate your drop in. I’m glad we’ve been able to connect as poets on this site. You are such a kind person and I fucking adore you!
A wee bit of sarcasm. 😇
I appreciate your drop in. I’m glad we’ve been able to connect as poets on this site. You are such a kind person and I fucking adore you!