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What is This
When fingertips hover over the keys
Or twirl the barrel of the pen
Trying to force the expression
A frustration sets in
Even though the emotion lingers
The words are stuck at the dam
Suddenly
Like a gentle breeze coming through the door
A thought crosses the mind
A key word
Like a tiny spark of invention that makes you ask
What is this?
It’s the muse
Awakened
Gentle hands on your shoulder
Whispering
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Published 5th Apr 2025
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6th Apr 2025 4:23am
Nice. Inspirational and motivational, at least to me. When one is struck with the sudden euphoria of wanting to express and create, the experience tells itself of the author (at least for me it does). I always seem to find my current struggles in my writings, and I'm liberated when I complete a work. Anyway, this is fantastic. Thanks for sharing!
26th Apr 2025 6:35am
Thanks Connotation.
It is a great feeling. Reading Eerie's work just suddenly gave me the hint, waiting on that key word that seemed to unlock the door (or release the water from the dam).
It is a great feeling. Reading Eerie's work just suddenly gave me the hint, waiting on that key word that seemed to unlock the door (or release the water from the dam).
6th Apr 2025 4:46am
Beautifully penned, Wally. The creative spark is a thing of beauty my friend. Great read. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
26th Apr 2025 6:36am
Thanks Damian. The light that ignites everything at the beginning can come and go so quick, we have to be ready to catch it.
I appreciate your comments.
I appreciate your comments.
