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~ “cooooOOOOO-woo-woo-woo”
https://youtu.be/JwvuiTedQgw?feature=shared
starts in monotone
of just the beats of a heart
a humbly stylish pull off
from the retro disco times
comes the cynosure..
your incessantly spaced~ paced
shrilly cooooOOOOO-woo-woo-woo
(repeats in infinite refrains)
as if many one worded precis writing
of your lengthening ever poetic discourse..
wooing calls of love
short sharp enigmatic bits..
stitching as one profundity
digs a never felt before feltness
evoking a conflicting roller-coaster
of an over-shyly blooming vacuum
.. yet a voraciously filling up
gravity~ anti gravity plays
in a zigzag oscillating swings
of an incurably rarefying ..
a deathly shrieking series of .. many
inner ballooning in.. sacral tickling
displacement drops..
though equivocally neutered
with the such silencing in, needly
sharp aero-dynamically risen high
constrictions of the self.. in
maddeningly dizzying heights
pulled to your channelling in metal
I run with blurring heavy teary eyes
filling~falling of mixed emotions
towards you, your singing
calls that’s streaming in.. as
an intense sparking
cracker works of a chaos.. plucks
string that fires in slow
in an infinite heaven
of a shallowly skirmishing
an arousal continuum.. your
petrichor flavour choking
me in wanton strangulations
over my sweaty sticking
dewdrop mists.. over
the tender~ slender swan
neck in your remote grips
sets a raining stage
to a now violently drenching… a
vulnerable drumming chest .. in
looking upto the magnetic you
the maestro- in a rapturous rush
of an orchestrating bleed ..
your express eruptive eyes
in revelling reddening fonts
of an epic love-in-revolution
amidst the flying high
ecstatically effervescing
whitening cumulus clouds
of dove.. our all-in-one
hybridised harbingers…of
a summer-raining
heaven-
music. peace. love
Published 2nd Apr 2025
Author's Note
Inspired write by a 1990 Tamil Romantic movie ‘Idhayathamarai’ -lotus of heart - its one number .. esp its first 15 seconds .. then also unyil 50 seconds of this song linked below & at top of poem :
https://youtu.be/JwvuiTedQgw?feature=shared
Image: web. from this song .
Also, the title is inspired by this locely article on mourning doves 🕊️♥️
https://www.birdsandblooms.com/birding/bird-species/medium-sized-land-birds/mourning-dove-call-sound/?srsltid=AfmBOop8A6-OHP5HdNsTJD8PYN4QSXeTos2oFZvqQrb7CUCVTuRHkzWh
Also #2 Napo 25 entry
♥️🕊️💖🫂✍️
https://youtu.be/JwvuiTedQgw?feature=shared
Image: web. from this song .
Also, the title is inspired by this locely article on mourning doves 🕊️♥️
https://www.birdsandblooms.com/birding/bird-species/medium-sized-land-birds/mourning-dove-call-sound/?srsltid=AfmBOop8A6-OHP5HdNsTJD8PYN4QSXeTos2oFZvqQrb7CUCVTuRHkzWh
Also #2 Napo 25 entry
♥️🕊️💖🫂✍️
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3rd Apr 2025 00:08am
Love the poem and passion you created with this piece. I would probably need to see the film in order to understand the poem even more. Great work Uma. xoxo
3rd Apr 2025 00:46am
There are so many lines of beauty in this that I felt I died and yet I live.
eruptive eyes - sheesh!
Excellent offering, Uma! You're doing fabulous for your first NaPo!
eruptive eyes - sheesh!
Excellent offering, Uma! You're doing fabulous for your first NaPo!
3rd Apr 2025 2:08am
whatever it’s about, it’s just jazz pure and simple it’s scat
louis armstrong, it’s minnie the moocher, it doesn’t matter
what it is just makes me feel ..
it’s beautiful
louis armstrong, it’s minnie the moocher, it doesn’t matter
what it is just makes me feel ..
it’s beautiful
3rd Apr 2025 2:37am
Beautifully penned, Uma. Such a great read my friend. I liked this a lot. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
