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She's My Whisky
she moves across crowded room
glass tilted
double scotch
inches from her lips
I wanna be that drink
slidin down her throat
sharp and potent
leavin my mark
burnin just enough
to make her want more
liquid fire flowin thru her veins
findin my way deep inside of her
penetratin her senses
blurrin her edges
cloudin her judgment
with a whisper of dangerous intent
I could be that double scotch
rippin thru her
spreadin her wide
no resistance
I’ll leave her wrecked
dawn will find her
broken and achin
twisted in hotel sheets
mouth swollen
marked with my memory
tastin only my ghost
only my burn between her lips
tremblin
rememberin how I entered her
how I destroyed her
and how she begged for every drop
glass tilted
double scotch
inches from her lips
I wanna be that drink
slidin down her throat
sharp and potent
leavin my mark
burnin just enough
to make her want more
liquid fire flowin thru her veins
findin my way deep inside of her
penetratin her senses
blurrin her edges
cloudin her judgment
with a whisper of dangerous intent
I could be that double scotch
rippin thru her
spreadin her wide
no resistance
I’ll leave her wrecked
dawn will find her
broken and achin
twisted in hotel sheets
mouth swollen
marked with my memory
tastin only my ghost
only my burn between her lips
tremblin
rememberin how I entered her
how I destroyed her
and how she begged for every drop
Author's Note
This was sent to me by an anonymous writer, I love being someone's drink of choice.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. She's My Whisky
25th Mar 2025 1:09am
They've no return address?
And hey, whisky is the decadent choice! Scotch is for refined wannabe's. Lol
And hey, whisky is the decadent choice! Scotch is for refined wannabe's. Lol
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Re: Re. She's My Whisky
25th Mar 2025 1:17am
No return address. Sent it and said I could post it if I wanted to. Whisky decadent choice. Nice
Thank you Styx
Thank you Styx
Re. She's My Whisky
25th Mar 2025 1:16am
Sensual overtone from a glass of liquid courage to enhance the deepness of the moments 🔥🔥🔥👏
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Re: Re. She's My Whisky
25th Mar 2025 1:23am
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25th Mar 2025 2:05am
Re. She's My Whisky
25th Mar 2025 1:19am
Firebrand Whisky, huh? Must be Scottish then without the 'e'. If it makes one feel this good, I definitely want some! Excellently written, Fia. 😉🥃
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Re: Re. She's My Whisky
25th Mar 2025 1:25am
Re: Re. She's My Whisky
25th Mar 2025 1:31am
Oh shit! That Whisky is damn strong... damn! What a beautiful poem, Fia. Thank you for sharing their poem with us. 😁
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Re: Re. She's My Whisky
25th Mar 2025 1:36am
Re: Re. She's My Whisky
25th Mar 2025 2:01am
I think so too. Your Whisky would be 'extra' strong, naturally & the label would have some kind of fire insignia on it for sure, lol. Billy's using his posh words tonight! You just know it's gonna sell big. 😉 🔥
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Re. She's My Whisky
25th Mar 2025 1:42am
Re: Re. She's My Whisky
25th Mar 2025 1:45am
Re. She's My Whisky
25th Mar 2025 4:08am
Damn, Fia. You got secret admirers writing poems about you. Whiskey is a good choice, I was a Bourbon man, back when I used to drink. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
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Re: Re. She's My Whisky
25th Mar 2025 9:25am
Re. She's My Whisky
Something to savour to have a got a letter like that. The verse:
"burnin just enough
to make her want more
liquid fire flowin thru her veins
findin my way deep inside of her
and what follows gives me a mental picture of the narrator rampantly getting into her (physically, literally and she willingly) later that night, with nowt left on them both!
"burnin just enough
to make her want more
liquid fire flowin thru her veins
findin my way deep inside of her
and what follows gives me a mental picture of the narrator rampantly getting into her (physically, literally and she willingly) later that night, with nowt left on them both!
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Re: Re. She's My Whisky
25th Mar 2025 8:51pm
Re. She's My Whisky
26th Mar 2025 1:15pm
Re: Re. She's My Whisky
26th Mar 2025 1:18pm
Is it right? I hope whoever wrote this sees the reaction it is getting.;))