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You and Me Redux - an Early Poetspeak Poem
We fight, we laugh, we call each other names
We make love, sometimes rougher than usual
We drink, cook food, talk about our day
You and Me
Always
We make love, sometimes rougher than usual
We drink, cook food, talk about our day
You and Me
Always
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Re. You and Me Redux - an Eariy Poetspeak Poem
14th Mar 2025 12:55pm
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14th Mar 2025 1:04pm
Re. You and Me Redux - an Early Poetspeak Poem
Anonymous
14th Mar 2025 1:18pm
The words relay something deeper without saying it. Nice one.

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14th Mar 2025 1:48pm
Re. You and Me Redux - an Early Poetspeak Poem
14th Mar 2025 2:05pm
How early? And what is Redux, sir? Maybe I'm missing something. It's not uncommon though, lol. 😉
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Re: Re. You and Me Redux - an Early Poetspeak Poem
14th Mar 2025 2:10pm
First posted in December, 2013
One of my first poems
Redux means a repeat of sorts..
One of my first poems
Redux means a repeat of sorts..
Re: Re. You and Me Redux - an Early Poetspeak Poem
14th Mar 2025 2:47pm
WOW! That is early! Glad you're reminiscing. Thanks for clearing that up. I actually thought Redux was a type of paint you were using, like Gouache, for example. I'm glad I chose not to go with my hunch. 😉
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14th Mar 2025 3:48pm
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14th Mar 2025 2:56pm
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14th Mar 2025 5:12pm
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14th Mar 2025 5:41pm
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14th Mar 2025 11:12pm
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14th Mar 2025 11:47pm
Thanks Bat !
Before I knew how to write, I wrote better …
Quirky I had brown ones and had them all the way around
Before I knew how to write, I wrote better …
Quirky I had brown ones and had them all the way around
Re. You and Me Redux - an Early Poetspeak Poem
14th Mar 2025 11:30pm
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14th Mar 2025 11:52pm
I took my writing a little more seriously when I 1st came here. Now I just say fuck it!
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15th Mar 2025 00:50am
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Re: Re. You and Me Redux - an Early Poetspeak Poem
15th Mar 2025 5:46am
Well let's take that leap of faith 🙏 and uncover the spoken words ✍️ of the past 👏💪👍👊💯
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Re. You and Me Redux - an Early Poetspeak Poem
15th Mar 2025 1:06pm
I'm one to repost one's from time to time. Leave them up for about a week, then hide or delete them, the original post's still there of course.
But to your. Succinct capture of how love should be - always. 👍
But to your. Succinct capture of how love should be - always. 👍
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15th Mar 2025 1:31pm