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Impressive
you got to admire
the braveness of
Archive playing
very long songs
in a world & time
of fast food music
for having the guts
to play huge parts
instrumental their
lengthy silences
for their build up
starting laid-back
quiet & dreamlike
until suddenly it's
hypnotic trip hop
or jaw-dropping
progressive rock
with stunning riffs
how intricate their
compositions are
it wasn't a concert
it was a drug free trip
& a unique experience
an event i cherish forever
the braveness of
Archive playing
very long songs
in a world & time
of fast food music
for having the guts
to play huge parts
instrumental their
lengthy silences
for their build up
starting laid-back
quiet & dreamlike
until suddenly it's
hypnotic trip hop
or jaw-dropping
progressive rock
with stunning riffs
how intricate their
compositions are
it wasn't a concert
it was a drug free trip
& a unique experience
an event i cherish forever
Author's Note
Archive - Get Out (2025)
...The Archive Series...
https://youtu.be/9IS3mb61vis
...The Archive Series...
https://youtu.be/9IS3mb61vis
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Re. Impressive
5th Mar 2025 2:27pm
It was a drug free trip+ Now that is a concert. to feel the effect, it has on you. This is good. (enjoyed the video)
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6th Mar 2025 11:42am
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5th Mar 2025 2:30pm
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6th Mar 2025 11:42am
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5th Mar 2025 3:18pm
Music is always a drug free trip. This poem shows your love for this band. Awesome write. Cheers to you Duende.
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6th Mar 2025 11:44am
Soulless music / music created by AI doesn't imo. It was by far the best concert I've been to.
1, 2 and 3 in my personal top 3. Thanks heaps for your comment and cheers to you too :-)
1, 2 and 3 in my personal top 3. Thanks heaps for your comment and cheers to you too :-)
Re. Impressive
5th Mar 2025 4:09pm
Love this musical tribute. Music is such a vital part of our experiences, and in just one song can take us back decades to our childhood or first love. Thanks for sharing.
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6th Mar 2025 11:46am
Music can surely take us back. Thanks heaps for your comment & the RL, I appreciate it 💕
Re. Impressive
5th Mar 2025 7:35pm
Superbly crafted Duende, sounds like a blast, had another look at them, awesome ♥️
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6th Mar 2025 11:50am
Yes, I had a blast for sure. You made my day by having another look. Thanks heaps, Pete ♥️
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6th Mar 2025 11:53am
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5th Mar 2025 9:39pm
Beautifully penned, Duende. Into the list it belongs. I smiled the whole time I read this, I'm so glad you had such a wonderful experience, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
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6th Mar 2025 11:53am
You smiling the whole time means a lot, my friend. Thanks heaps for your comment & RL :-)
Re. Impressive
6th Mar 2025 1:24am
You know why I love this, sis. Grateful beyond words beauty found you in their music 💖
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Re: Re. Impressive
6th Mar 2025 11:58am
Yes, I know :-) Grateful is exactly how I feel. Thanks heaps for your comment & RL, sis 💖
Re. Impressive
loved the flow & your concise singlet couplet style dear Duende! Ahh how i missed reading you all these days.. sad DU closing.. but hope I read you till du end & beyond too.. where perhaps we are connected sure xx
this poem has a meditative essence in it .. as you say sans any dope.. & I liked loved this standalone , even without considering the music references :) & yes, loved the minimalistic tee in its skull-full ness:) .. in a same mood in here today.. as i pen some dark skully write hopefully lol Light Love ev dear XO
this poem has a meditative essence in it .. as you say sans any dope.. & I liked loved this standalone , even without considering the music references :) & yes, loved the minimalistic tee in its skull-full ness:) .. in a same mood in here today.. as i pen some dark skully write hopefully lol Light Love ev dear XO
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Yesterday 7:46am
That my poem has a meditative essence in it is a huge compliment. Your skull-full ness made me smile too. I missed reading you too, dear Uma, but we have three weeks left to catch up and hopefully we meet again on another community, keeping my fingers crossed 🙏🏻
Thanks heaps for dropping by, my dear & for leaving an amazing comment on my page. xXx
Thanks heaps for dropping by, my dear & for leaving an amazing comment on my page. xXx