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Go To Bed
I do not want to sleep
You have no choice
I want to stay up and see
See what? Get in the bed
How about we have a chat
Enough stalling do you understand that
You're no fun at all
If you get in the bed we can have a ball
Oh you don't say
I do feel sleepy
Good I know you would see it my way
If I didn't what would you have done?
I have several instruments and I would choose one.
But I am being good you see
Get to bed on the count of three
As quick as she turn, he grabbed the whip
She purposely paused. She likes every bit
You have no choice
I want to stay up and see
See what? Get in the bed
How about we have a chat
Enough stalling do you understand that
You're no fun at all
If you get in the bed we can have a ball
Oh you don't say
I do feel sleepy
Good I know you would see it my way
If I didn't what would you have done?
I have several instruments and I would choose one.
But I am being good you see
Get to bed on the count of three
As quick as she turn, he grabbed the whip
She purposely paused. She likes every bit
Author's Note
Night to you all or Morning lol
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Re: Re. Go To Bed
27th Feb 2025 12:18pm
Re. Go To Bed
27th Feb 2025 6:58am
A jaunty little write, Fia. Nicely done, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
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Re: Re. Go To Bed
27th Feb 2025 12:19pm
Re. Go To Bed
27th Feb 2025 8:42am
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27th Feb 2025 12:20pm
Re. Go To Bed
27th Feb 2025 11:37am
Who wants to go to sleep when Fia's around. Clever, sexy piece my friend..xoxo
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27th Feb 2025 12:23pm
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27th Feb 2025 12:26pm
Re. Go To Bed
27th Feb 2025 12:23pm
In the spirit of honest critique, in line 7, I believe you mean “you’re” and not “your”
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27th Feb 2025 12:29pm
Re. Go To Bed
27th Feb 2025 12:38pm
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27th Feb 2025 12:39pm
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27th Feb 2025 12:42pm
Re. Go To Bed
27th Feb 2025 2:22pm
Yes! Look forward to going to bed; even in the middle of the day: 24/7. Okay. Hugs and love, O
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27th Feb 2025 2:31pm
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27th Feb 2025 2:36pm
Re. Go To Bed
27th Feb 2025 9:54pm
Oh my! That moved quickly from sleepy time to fun! Very arousing write!
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27th Feb 2025 10:43pm
Re. Go To Bed
28th Feb 2025 4:43am
No one's ever gonna get to sleep tonight... especially if whips are involved!
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28th Feb 2025 4:48am