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Senryu
Idolatry Sin (In the Stars)
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Idolatry Sin (In the Stars)
Stature uncoupled
Enigmatic conundrum
Fathom a sun's moon
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Connotation
Published
23rd Feb 2025
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Re. Idolatry Sin (In the Stars)
Anne-Ri999
23rd Feb 2025 11:33am
Hello C,
For me this short concise write had wide outspanning wings, like sound waves work I felt the words were given their power into a release, really enjoyed this haiku! Greetings and blessings,
Rianne
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Connotation
23rd Feb 2025 11:46pm
Thanks for the feedback. I felt compelled to contribute something, even if just a haiku. Glad you like it.
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