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I was told that I'm a criminal
I have a criminal mind
I have a criminal need
I have a criminal dependency
I need others to exist
I need a little help from my friends
I get help all the time from the strangest places
Every suicide
Every plane crash, car accident, overdose etc..
Everything helps me
I'm getting stronger every day
I'm feeling better about myself all the time
Before the medication my doctor put me on,
The person I cared about was myself
Now I see that others matter
Now I see things a lot differently
I think I'm growing inside
I was told that I'm a criminal
I believe them
I believe everything they tell me
Like i said before
I have needs
I need something you have
Come here
Come on, don't be scared
Come closer
Good
NOW GIVE IT TO ME BEFORE I RIP YOUR FUCKING THROAT OUT!!
I have a criminal need
I have a criminal dependency
I need others to exist
I need a little help from my friends
I get help all the time from the strangest places
Every suicide
Every plane crash, car accident, overdose etc..
Everything helps me
I'm getting stronger every day
I'm feeling better about myself all the time
Before the medication my doctor put me on,
The person I cared about was myself
Now I see that others matter
Now I see things a lot differently
I think I'm growing inside
I was told that I'm a criminal
I believe them
I believe everything they tell me
Like i said before
I have needs
I need something you have
Come here
Come on, don't be scared
Come closer
Good
NOW GIVE IT TO ME BEFORE I RIP YOUR FUCKING THROAT OUT!!
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Re. I was told that I'm a criminal
21st Feb 2025 12:54pm
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21st Feb 2025 12:56pm
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21st Feb 2025 1:08pm
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21st Feb 2025 6:34pm
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21st Feb 2025 7:05pm
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21st Feb 2025 2:38pm
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21st Feb 2025 2:42pm
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21st Feb 2025 3:53pm
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21st Feb 2025 3:59pm
So many out there that are weak. Stay strong, still diligent. Thanks man for the review
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21st Feb 2025 5:15pm
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21st Feb 2025 5:24pm
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21st Feb 2025 10:39pm
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21st Feb 2025 10:49pm
Re. I was told that I'm a criminal
22nd Feb 2025 4:19am
Powerful write, Keith. Tarantino, thumbs up, perhaps a black & white film. Just sayin'. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Re: Re. I was told that I'm a criminal
22nd Feb 2025 11:20am
B&W films do create a totally different vibe for the viewer. Love em. Thanks for the feedback!
Re. I was told that I'm a criminal
25th Feb 2025 11:35am
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/536084-an-inspiration-from-vision-of-insanitys/
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25th Feb 2025 1:48pm
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