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A hidden drawer, a whispered name.
A world unkown, a flickering flame.
Naked bodies,strange and bold.
Confusion stirred, a rising heat,
A throbbing pulse, a secret beat.
My innocent eyes, wide with surprise,
A new sensation, a strange sunrise.
No understanding, just a pull,
A primal urge, a world to cull.
Curiosity's hand, a trembling touch,
A hidden hunger, oh so much.
The images danced, a blurred array,
A seed of longing, sown that day.
A secret world, a hidden desire,
A burning question, setting me afire.
A world unkown, a flickering flame.
Naked bodies,strange and bold.
Confusion stirred, a rising heat,
A throbbing pulse, a secret beat.
My innocent eyes, wide with surprise,
A new sensation, a strange sunrise.
No understanding, just a pull,
A primal urge, a world to cull.
Curiosity's hand, a trembling touch,
A hidden hunger, oh so much.
The images danced, a blurred array,
A seed of longing, sown that day.
A secret world, a hidden desire,
A burning question, setting me afire.
Published Yesterday
Author's Note
its a poem about the first time I saw a porn magazine,I was six years old.
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Yesterday 2:22pm
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Yesterday 3:43pm
I like how you captured the confusion and the excitement. Discovering something for the first time opens new doors we never knew. That pull definitely sets a stage for what's to come... Other times, we can be forcefully pulled through a door into the darkness. But that's something different altogether.
I loved experiencing this with you through your words.
I loved experiencing this with you through your words.
Yesterday 6:17pm
Thank you so much! I really appreciate you taking the time to read and share your thoughts. It means a lot that the confusion and excitement resonated with you. I agree, that feeling of discovery is so powerful – it really can feel like stepping into a new world. And you're right, there's definitely a difference between that exciting pull and being dragged into something unknown. I'm glad you enjoyed the journey!
Yesterday 6:07pm
I initially thought it was about two secret lovers sharing a stolen time for liaison but now I have seen your footnote I find it is apt for what you are describing of your own experience.
Yesterday 6:18pm
Thank you so much! I really appreciate you taking the time to read and share your thoughts. It means a lot that the confusion and excitement resonated with you. I agree, that feeling of discovery is so powerful – it really can feel like stepping into a new world. And you're right, there's definitely a difference between that exciting pull and being dragged into something unknown. I'm glad you enjoyed the journey!
Yesterday 6:36pm
Okay 6 year old eyes on porn. This is a great look through them. Not realizing what is being seen but cannot put it down. That day started something yet did not developed until you explored on it later in your life. Just taking a guess. Nice piece
Yesterday 6:43pm
Thanks for your insightful comment. You've definitely picked up on a key element of the poem – that sense of something being seen, yet not fully understood at the time. It's that initial spark, that seed planted, which may or may not fully blossom until much later. I appreciate you sharing your interpretation!
How much excitement and how much confusion?
You apply your adult understanding to a child’s understanding when a child can’t comprehend sensuality.
Just curious because I was five years old.
Your poem is very good, very sensual.
You apply your adult understanding to a child’s understanding when a child can’t comprehend sensuality.
Just curious because I was five years old.
Your poem is very good, very sensual.
Today 5:57am
That excitement got me so obsessed with the beauty of naked women,the confusion was more about the big cocks I saw in the magazine,and now I am obsessed with mine.
Well I was curious and comprehending sensuality...well just say this she tastes good.
Well I was curious and comprehending sensuality...well just say this she tastes good.
