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Couples Unexpectedly Similar #1
In twilight waters jellyfish glide,
soft tendrils dance a lover's guide,
umbrella skies above in love's tide.
Moonlit waves where hearts twine.
jellyfish glow, a luminous sign,
umbrellas whisper: "You are mine."
Beneath the sea, in secret dreams,
jellyfish drift, where romance gleams
umbrellas shelter love's true beams.
Waves caress in a tender sweep.
Jellyfish pulse in the ocean deep.
Umbrellas hold the vows they keep.
In the depths, where love will flow,
jellyfish shine their lights aglow,
umbrellas arch a loving show.
Author's Note
I just saw an umbrella floating on the sea...
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Re. Couples Unexpectedly Similar #1
18th Feb 2025 12:24pm
You always seem to come up with yet another creative concept, amazing what floating umbrellas can bring you!
Have a lovely day Paulo, love and blessings
Rianne
Have a lovely day Paulo, love and blessings
Rianne
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18th Feb 2025 2:02pm
Caught in love's tide, or perhaps just lust, an umbrella does nothing to keep me from getting wet. I love the sensual imagery, the dreamy feel of being pulled into an ocean of caresses and kisses. Still it does also remind me of the time I was caught in a school of jelly fish and they stung the hell of me. I suppose they were just showing their love, in their own way... ;)
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18th Feb 2025 2:33pm
Oh, the amazing results of shared similarities. As usual an excellent and creative poem. HKL
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Re. Couples Unexpectedly Similar #1
19th Feb 2025 3:01am
Beautifully penned, PAR. Into the list it belongs. Love the rhyming scheme, my friend. Nicely executed. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
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