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Oh Yes, Make Me Water, My Love
Feed me grapes from the vine of its lover’s cup
Sweeten elixir streaming down my chin, you slowly lick it up
My back rests on a soft patch of moss
Take my mind and body, surrendering my words unto thee, suspending me for a weakening passionate loss
Umm…what a beautiful tumble and a toss
Greek Gods and Greek Goddesses, sultry sway to the echoes of the harp
A rainbow kissed by the Moon and the Universe, passionately larks
I have descended from the sky you clasped my hand
This is no ordinary love romance
Feeling the hard girth of your winding dance
Tenderness reflected while looking into each other’s eyes, touch me I softly say
Caressing my body from head to my toes as we forget about daily strife as we play
The stratosphere cradles the moanfully sounds of our hasten romance
Ascending even higher in this blissful cadence dance
A beautiful heartfelt choice to take a chance
Bodies now as one, as you slowly steer the vessel of your starship
A hungry slip, and then a rush of a Milky Way dip
Carress, touches, kisses, explosive passion under your dominating power
Breaking pieces of my emotions off among the galaxy as a falling meteorite shower
Igniting the wick of our love
No greater sensation I could ever speak of
I hear your voice, I taste your yearn
Blind passion of desires, sultry flames you allow to beautifully burn
Without you, my body mourns for you to lavishly adorn
You give me intense love
Kissed by the moon, ordained by the stars, cupid’s arrow shot from the stars above
I feel your heartbeat from miles
The Heavens opens every time you make me smile
The Universe and the Moon
Doves flying in sequence over the Nile Blue lagoons
The gentle breeze blessing our bodies, desire escalating as fiery heat in the month of June
Swans swimming in our enjoyment heading to the horizon
Clasps of hands, laughter heard without ever realizing
Bare essences cocooning one another
Kisses to my skin, as your body slowly hovers
To the Heavens, as you scream out my beautiful name
A rainfall, and then the body shudders in paradise as you please this sexy dame
Allow me to please you without any earthy shame
Gold plated plague as love sinks into its own lust filled fame
Love giveth love received
Only for you and me to ever believe
Hushed feelings to ascend as far as the eyes could see
Emotions lead our path as passion flees
Enrapturing the union of our desired needs
Making sweet and slow love from dusk to dawn
A love song heard in the sky as bodies hum along
Angels dance in glee
For this lover’s union to be
#CelebratingBlackHeritageMonth
Sweeten elixir streaming down my chin, you slowly lick it up
My back rests on a soft patch of moss
Take my mind and body, surrendering my words unto thee, suspending me for a weakening passionate loss
Umm…what a beautiful tumble and a toss
Greek Gods and Greek Goddesses, sultry sway to the echoes of the harp
A rainbow kissed by the Moon and the Universe, passionately larks
I have descended from the sky you clasped my hand
This is no ordinary love romance
Feeling the hard girth of your winding dance
Tenderness reflected while looking into each other’s eyes, touch me I softly say
Caressing my body from head to my toes as we forget about daily strife as we play
The stratosphere cradles the moanfully sounds of our hasten romance
Ascending even higher in this blissful cadence dance
A beautiful heartfelt choice to take a chance
Bodies now as one, as you slowly steer the vessel of your starship
A hungry slip, and then a rush of a Milky Way dip
Carress, touches, kisses, explosive passion under your dominating power
Breaking pieces of my emotions off among the galaxy as a falling meteorite shower
Igniting the wick of our love
No greater sensation I could ever speak of
I hear your voice, I taste your yearn
Blind passion of desires, sultry flames you allow to beautifully burn
Without you, my body mourns for you to lavishly adorn
You give me intense love
Kissed by the moon, ordained by the stars, cupid’s arrow shot from the stars above
I feel your heartbeat from miles
The Heavens opens every time you make me smile
The Universe and the Moon
Doves flying in sequence over the Nile Blue lagoons
The gentle breeze blessing our bodies, desire escalating as fiery heat in the month of June
Swans swimming in our enjoyment heading to the horizon
Clasps of hands, laughter heard without ever realizing
Bare essences cocooning one another
Kisses to my skin, as your body slowly hovers
To the Heavens, as you scream out my beautiful name
A rainfall, and then the body shudders in paradise as you please this sexy dame
Allow me to please you without any earthy shame
Gold plated plague as love sinks into its own lust filled fame
Love giveth love received
Only for you and me to ever believe
Hushed feelings to ascend as far as the eyes could see
Emotions lead our path as passion flees
Enrapturing the union of our desired needs
Making sweet and slow love from dusk to dawn
A love song heard in the sky as bodies hum along
Angels dance in glee
For this lover’s union to be
#CelebratingBlackHeritageMonth
Published 16th Feb 2025
Author's Note
Let the rain kiss you. Let the rain beat upon your head with silver liquid drops. Let the rain sing you a lullaby.
Langston Hughes
Langston Hughes
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16th Feb 2025 7:24pm
That's a really lush and sensual poem. It's overflowing with romantic and erotic imagery, drawing on mythology and cosmic metaphors to create a sense of heightened passion. It's definitely a poem that celebrates physical and emotional intimacy.
16th Feb 2025 9:15pm
Ahh, thank you with much sincerity, my poet for taking the time from your own creativity, to help celebrate in mine.
And thank you for such appreciative words.
Please enjoy the remainder of your Sun-Day.
Love and Hugs, always,
SKC🤎
And thank you for such appreciative words.
Please enjoy the remainder of your Sun-Day.
Love and Hugs, always,
SKC🤎
16th Feb 2025 7:35pm
Favourite line, which most underlines the 'wet' theme:
The Heavens opens every time you make me smile
The Heavens opens every time you make me smile
16th Feb 2025 9:19pm
As, a wise poet, you have selected tender words that holds such passion behind the sentiment, and very favorable to relish by the heart.
In as much, thank you for taking the time to read,
Enjoy the remainder of your Sun-Day, as I wish you a great week ahead.
SKC🤎
In as much, thank you for taking the time to read,
Enjoy the remainder of your Sun-Day, as I wish you a great week ahead.
SKC🤎
Anonymous
16th Feb 2025 7:53pm
Very beautiful sexual expressions.
16th Feb 2025 8:45pm
Oh my shall you and I give this a try that within this stanza
Carress, touches, kisses, explosive passion under your dominating power
Breaking pieces of my emotions off among the galaxy as a falling meteorite shower
Igniting the wick of our love
No greater sensation I could ever speak of
I hear your voice, I taste your yearn
Blind passion of desires, sultry flames you allow to beautifully burn
that would be sweet
Carress, touches, kisses, explosive passion under your dominating power
Breaking pieces of my emotions off among the galaxy as a falling meteorite shower
Igniting the wick of our love
No greater sensation I could ever speak of
I hear your voice, I taste your yearn
Blind passion of desires, sultry flames you allow to beautifully burn
that would be sweet
16th Feb 2025 10:06pm
Ahh...what a great poetic summary, my friend and thank you for taking the time to read and adding your wisp of adoration.
Enjoy your Sun-Day, as I wish you a productive week ahead.
Love and Hugs, always,
SKC🖤
Enjoy your Sun-Day, as I wish you a productive week ahead.
Love and Hugs, always,
SKC🖤
17th Feb 2025 5:06am
This poem is a breathtakingly. A very beautiful expression of love and passion! ❤️🔥
The imagery is vivid, the language is sensual, and the emotions are deeply heartfelt. Truly captivating!
Your ink is never wasted my queen.
The imagery is vivid, the language is sensual, and the emotions are deeply heartfelt. Truly captivating!
Your ink is never wasted my queen.
18th Feb 2025 8:51pm
Well, isn't this a surprise, my King, and if I have not told you Happy New Year, then it resonates to you, and thank you from the bottom of my heart, for taking the time to read and then adding such a tender comment.
Please do not stay away with your poetic whispers, they have been missed in absence.
Enjoy the remainder of your day.
Love and Hugs, always,
SKC🖤
Please do not stay away with your poetic whispers, they have been missed in absence.
Enjoy the remainder of your day.
Love and Hugs, always,
SKC🖤
17th Feb 2025 12:04pm
Aqua pura keeping it moist and lubricated as you guide us through the passion of lovers who are thirsty for each other.
18th Feb 2025 8:55pm
I like that, my wandering poet, Aqua Pure, and much appreciation for the wet sentiment, if I must say.
In addition, thank you for taking the time read and adding a heartfelt comment.
Love and Hugs, always,
SKC🐾🐾
In addition, thank you for taking the time read and adding a heartfelt comment.
Love and Hugs, always,
SKC🐾🐾
