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~the trance-ease- shun #1 :: a LITT, yet TMHR moment..
it’s never easy.. this a transition
with it’s force fed death at each
of it’s dizzying hairpin bend turn..
you pin down in a flash second
the awaiting eye of a needle.. in
but to all it’s trancing.. an ultimate
liberation.. of the One hardcore
sedimentational truth, this love
when you said those.. in an easy flow
that
you didn’t love me (that much) as I do..
(a bouldering LITT ..Lump InThe Throat …
was in the sumptuous choking.. neither
rolling down nor trying to be be there .. a
ticking speechless bomb i suicidally planted..
yet trying to be kicking alive .. for the love
of love itself … & the absolute truth it holds ..)
& ye, when you said those
(i tend not to repeat again that here again..)
(a lightness paradise bird.. paragliding smooth
in plumes of peacockish hues & an eagle’’s
majestic screeching a royal proclamation.. flying
over the untouched never before realizing
inner peaks of my infinite skies.. I feel these words
you said, which i may not repeat again.. as looks like
perhaps it’s becoming psychotically saddening
yet ecstatically heavenly… these words you said .. as TMHR ..
The Most Honest & Romantic.. a momentless moment
ever..)
Published 16th Feb 2025
Author's Note
just a scribble . as streaming consciousness .. in of for love . nothing less nothing more . thanks for the read xx
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16th Feb 2025 12:51pm
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16th Feb 2025 1:26pm
Your spiritual awareness n reflections in the read us amazing ev R .. that moment where one feels the clarity .. n wisdom .. in those sparks in the feel .. o feel perhaps overly intense in a holding beyond destiny.. but destiny had it’s plans n ways already . We seem as just mellifluous malleable vessels of feeling pain in all love .. a mere medium .. in purity of course . Love your wise words n pearls you shed ever to treasure Rianne .. light love to you xxx
16th Feb 2025 1:34pm
A lovely, heartfelt write Uma. Well said and so beautiful in it's wording and powerful message. Nice job.
16th Feb 2025 1:41pm
thanks much dear Keith .. coming from the poet n soul i adore much .. your presence n perception n reflections are a rarity gifted heaven to me n du dear one . much love ev xx
