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**Goodnight**
She falls asleep
She is too weak
to stay awake
She dies inside
Too many tears
She has cried
More than enough pills
she has taken
Her name has been forsaken
Goodnight
I fall asleep
I am too weak
to stay awake
I'm dying inside
Too many tears
I have cried
More than enough pills
I have taken
My name will be forsaken
Goodnight
She is too weak
to stay awake
She dies inside
Too many tears
She has cried
More than enough pills
she has taken
Her name has been forsaken
Goodnight
I fall asleep
I am too weak
to stay awake
I'm dying inside
Too many tears
I have cried
More than enough pills
I have taken
My name will be forsaken
Goodnight
Published 25th May 2012
| Edited 29th May 2012
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25th May 2012 9:42pm
I like the the transition from the 3rd person to the 1st perseon perspective in your poem ...for me it speaks to the cycle from the impersonal to the personal in life and all the trials for each person dealing secretly with it...thanks for the good read Nicky..
25th May 2012 11:00pm
