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Moon Glow
Not knowing I was watching
You removed the cares of the world
A weight you would bare
Shown in every fiber and sinew of you
You wailed into still waters
To reset and release
No, you do not need permission
To leave all formality behind
Completely lost and submerged
Awakened and revitalized
You re-emerged, finally free
The moon is pleased as it
Gently embraces you with its glow
You were made man
Shaped, tempered and released
In the essence of duality
Those who confront without justification
Are hard yet soft to the core
I am the only one to see a side of you
A side no other will be privileged to
Come to me, show me
Then, as if the spell had been broken...
The weight of reality softened the glow
You removed the cares of the world
A weight you would bare
Shown in every fiber and sinew of you
You wailed into still waters
To reset and release
No, you do not need permission
To leave all formality behind
Completely lost and submerged
Awakened and revitalized
You re-emerged, finally free
The moon is pleased as it
Gently embraces you with its glow
You were made man
Shaped, tempered and released
In the essence of duality
Those who confront without justification
Are hard yet soft to the core
I am the only one to see a side of you
A side no other will be privileged to
Come to me, show me
Then, as if the spell had been broken...
The weight of reality softened the glow
Author's Note
Tonight is the Full moon,
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Re. Moon Glow
12th Feb 2025 9:45pm
Seductive write, Fia. Into the list it belongs. Great read, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
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12th Feb 2025 11:51pm
👏 👏 👏 absolutely beautiful queen 👸 excellent 👌 musing!!
Please 🙏 keep on writing ✍ ok 👌 peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖 shalom
Please 🙏 keep on writing ✍ ok 👌 peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖 shalom
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13th Feb 2025 00:46am
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Reminds me of the scene in the British TV series Poldark, when (in sunny daytime) Ross Poldark takes a skinny dip on a Cornish beach watched unbeknown by Demelza. I imagine she might have thought the same of him as you have written.
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13th Feb 2025 2:16pm
I love it when my writes makes you remember a show, Solomon, That's cool. Thank you
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13th Feb 2025 7:16pm
I leave you for a second and you go and find another under the Moon... geez.... unbelievable
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17th Feb 2025 8:26pm
Amazing! This is such a good write, Fia. So mystical, spiritual & much more besides. Bravo! 🤗
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17th Feb 2025 8:28pm