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Midnight Hour
Nails scrape on a cold wall.
My heels strike the floor announcing I, have arrived
You look so lovely and sweet kneeling before me
I touch your skin, and heat radiates from it
A contrast to my cold touch
I lean over and whisper
“When the sky is pitch, and all light is void.
Then I will be free, and your pleasure will be mine.”
Hard swallows
Adoring eyes
No
Not yet
Soon!
My heels strike the floor announcing I, have arrived
You look so lovely and sweet kneeling before me
I touch your skin, and heat radiates from it
A contrast to my cold touch
I lean over and whisper
“When the sky is pitch, and all light is void.
Then I will be free, and your pleasure will be mine.”
Hard swallows
Adoring eyes
No
Not yet
Soon!
Author's Note
Almost vampiric. Just musing
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Re. Midnight Hour
12th Feb 2025 4:39am
Nicely Done 👍 actions in the midnight hours of sensual overtone of pleasure 👍👏
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Re. Midnight Hour
12th Feb 2025 4:49am
Sexy write, Fia. Into the list it belongs. "In the Midnight Hour" by Wilson Pickett, comes to mind. Great read, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
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12th Feb 2025 4:52am
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Re. Midnight Hour
12th Feb 2025 10:35am
This rocks Fia. Nicely described and well said for a shorter piece.
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Re. Midnight Hour
12th Feb 2025 11:54pm
👏 👏 👏 excellent erotica exquisite 👌 and very very illicit!!
Please 🙏 keep on writing ✍ ok queen 👸 peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖 shalom
Please 🙏 keep on writing ✍ ok queen 👸 peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖 shalom
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12th Feb 2025 11:56pm
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Re. Midnight Hour
21st Feb 2025 9:55pm
Ominous dark tones.
Made me think a sacrifice was coming; and a slot for a new submissive will have opened up.
Enjoyed.
Made me think a sacrifice was coming; and a slot for a new submissive will have opened up.
Enjoyed.
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21st Feb 2025 10:00pm