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Precipice Trilogy
life is dangerous
when death is calling
and you chase yourself
to answer
death is dangerous
a seductive void
when life is giving you
too much something
Indecision
is one foot in the grave
oops, don't trip
when death is calling
and you chase yourself
to answer
death is dangerous
a seductive void
when life is giving you
too much something
Indecision
is one foot in the grave
oops, don't trip
Published 12th Feb 2025
| Edited 18th Feb 2025
Author's Note
I wrote this in about one minute. just saying.
No, I'm not going to kill myself, but I am, at the moment, deeply depressed. It will pass. Writing pity party poems like this helps me cope.
No, I'm not going to kill myself, but I am, at the moment, deeply depressed. It will pass. Writing pity party poems like this helps me cope.
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12th Feb 2025 2:36am
I'm too lazy to knock myself off.
Maybe with pills, but I'm not gonna go out of my way:)
Maybe with pills, but I'm not gonna go out of my way:)
12th Feb 2025 3:37am
Suicide is hard work. I'm too lazy too. And too distracted by things I enjoy in life.
12th Feb 2025 4:16am
12th Feb 2025 5:34am
Dear PD,
Intriguing insight for each stanza. The last one has your wry humor stamp on it. The first two are fabulously interesting in perspectives I never would have thought about. I’m usually just in a black hole. Not chasing an answer or looking at what’s too much. This piece helped organize a way of thinking my way out of that black hole.
I appreciate that. H🌷
Intriguing insight for each stanza. The last one has your wry humor stamp on it. The first two are fabulously interesting in perspectives I never would have thought about. I’m usually just in a black hole. Not chasing an answer or looking at what’s too much. This piece helped organize a way of thinking my way out of that black hole.
I appreciate that. H🌷
14th Feb 2025 1:49am
12th Feb 2025 10:34am
Don't off yourself until you can't give anything more to society. And here at DUP you give some of the best story/poems I've ever read. Your stories & poems are creative, intriguing, clever and very different from the majority here. One minute or not for this write, it's still great!
14th Feb 2025 1:49am
15th Feb 2025 11:43am
Quite relatable...I have contemplated suicide umpteen times ....i suffer from chronic depression n mood swings
Very well penned, dear poetess ❤️
Very well penned, dear poetess ❤️
4th Mar 2025 4:33pm
