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Erotic Senses - Touch (Revised)

Wisps of hair tickling his nose
Slowly coming back to himself from dream travels.
Her warm sleeping mass draped over his side like a dense feather blanket.

Eyes closing again
slipping back into early morning
dreaming

———

The first press of lips. Soft and full.

Silky hair flowing his between fingers.

Clothed bodies pressed front to back.

Arms wrapped around her waist
Kisses over strong shoulders.

Delicious discomfort of his erection straining against unyielding fabric.
Friction of fingers cupping and teasing through tight denim.

Dense lithe body weighed in his lap.
Ass wriggling, tormenting his rigid erection.

Fingers worrying hard nipples through silky fabric.

The gravity of breasts weighed in cupping hands.

Hand slipping between blouse buttons, first warm touch of smooth soft skin.

Fingers tracing his biceps and pecs, still engorged from weightlifting.

Tongue circling her long hardened nipples. The gentle suction of tongue and lips playing, suckling, nibbling.

A single fingertip drawn up the sensitive underside of his taught erection.   Agonizingly slow from base to tip.

Hand sliding into unbuttoned jeans.
Caressing her through panties, already slippery damp.

Palm cupping pubic hair, scruffy thick. Middle finger dips between thick slippery folds, warm, wet.

Lubricated finger drawn up under her secretive nub; delightful circling.

Tongue muddling thick folds and shy clit, wetness blooming, slippery warm.  Pubic curls writhing-prickly against his nose.

Hard nipples dragging down is body chased by nibbling kisses and a cloak of silky hair.

Warm breath on bare skin.
Press of her pursed lips on glans,
sheathing him,
slowly,
in warm wetness.

Eager bodies merge with a single smooth motion burying his full length into her tight embrace.
Bodies writhing, straining,
Pleasure cresting.
Gripping satisfaction.

————-

Vague awareness or real touch
dream visions fade
at the touch of knowing fingers
stroking an intense
early morning erection
Written by Trillium
Published
Author's Note
This is a revised version based on some great feedback from Her. I like this version better. In the first attempt, I tried to make the collage of experiences random. I felt that it lacked flow. I took Her’s suggestion and grouped similar elements. There is perhaps some diffuse narrative but I think the collage idea is still evident with some more internal consistency. Comments comparing the two versions are very much appreciated.
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