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~“bloody sweet”
“Eat your chocolates, little girl,
Eat your chocolates!
Believe me, there’s no metaphysics on earth like chocolates,
And all religions put together teach no more than the candy shop.
Eat, dirty little girl, eat!
If only I could eat chocolates with the same truth as you!
But I think and, removing the silver paper that’s tinfoil,
I throw it on the ground, as I’ve thrown out life.)
~ “The Tobacco Shop”, Fernando Pessoa
I bite you in a perfect crunch.. more
specifically an arousing double crunch
in a deepening mysterious simultaneity
of a
middle sharply cut out clinical note..
a straight line crisply bite .. with
a sandwiched borderings.. of an
overpowering overtone.. a husky
mellowing down
an almost muted… yet faintly heard
alongside.. a smoothly sliding parallel
& a bit more elongating engagement- this
submissive- a biscuity wafery thick, a
melting mouthfeel for quite a while
the you..
in your natural dusky darkened, a timbery
hard masculinity.. tinted lusciously in richly
tanning complexions.. from my core i crave
much this dripping genuine your indigenous
cocoa.. in a pulling pheromonal sensualities
.. as you exert your muscling layers .. in your
peeling off wrappers.. in a drawing magnetic
nakedness.. with bulging embeds here & there
of your bundled sturdy packs calling me in .. in
your flexing embrace caving me in..
.. your flavouring ivories.. the aphrodisiacal
nuttiness bits in an aesthetic embed spread..
ruthlessly indulges me as a monstrous love
avatar .. in a full on biting hard thrills .. in a
series of acoustical crackling
addictions..I eat you
or you make me eat you in your teasers..
bit shamelessly & voraciously wild.. from this
my eons n eons of a hungering love .. in it’s
an uncompromising rustic purity ..
I gaze upon your almondy sharp
red hot eyes .. as the sacred alloying
Trishul third eye.. in the making
the swords you throw over in the silent airs
with a sonorously ringing whirring metallic
whips.. hit my waiting comatose spreads
in an awakening …
the ears are redhot rimmed tightgtened firebud
awaiting an eruptive climaxing blast … as if
a deathly evasion.. yet still bravely lustily
plateauing over those
near-climaxing zones forever .. keeping
your beating strides in a momentum…
with a spiced up stranglehold
of my swan neck in a pressure or
a pleasure? lock.. releases a riot
of dire harmonal chaos .. that raises
me an aerial hippy flexing serpent
up & above your hanging jaws in the tensed
up airs .. just reaching your mouth tight..
feeding you in my aching gushy liquescence
that has the flavour of your
kisses & humours- in a bloody sweet
the divine densely cacao.. licking wild
in a killing spree.. taking
& tucking both .. in & in & inner
each of us .. unto
the dissolving One depth
.. a beautiful Nothingness-
a non-egotistical love empire
where you my king
in a sultry salt-peppery majestic mane
lure me in your rubbing warm
ruby & emerald emery throne
you draped in an off white silken
wrapped turban... lap me in your
exuding hotness , growling in
your a bassy freaking bad ass tone
in this wilderness of love .. i
surrender to your
Avatar .. donned on your shoulder
with your eagle messenger .. that
dares to tear off my skins
in revelations of my inner
exuberant Sunning you .. in
gushing out yellowy slanting
5ish streams of my core
in sun lighted translucencies
drenching us in this radiance
… adding more to this flavour
are the killer nicotine scents
of your seducing swallowing mouth
eating me whole… as the february
snowy white beds raining on those
westernly borders of your
so- far off kingdom
.. soothingly cools me
in the wholly consuming pain
you take me in… in moaning
chants.. of this a wanton
hunted kill daily ritual
i give you my self fully
until unto this soul core
in this pain pleasuring
ecstatically peaking hunt
… of the sacrificial flesh n blood
…. & all the pure metal elemental
singing to the tunes of
the endlessly alternating
deaths & births
in l o v e
P.s:
For Him.. with love & adorations in all ways, always xx
Also, A tribute to Cocoa .. on this Chocolate day of Valentine day
Also, the poem is bit inspired by #Leo- Tamil film & their musical numbers - Bloidy Sweet & BadAss - as linked below . A big adoration to Actor Vijay in these numbers… from this diehard fan of him:)
https://youtu.be/qN3wfuPYTI4?feature=shared
https://youtu.be/ZdMZ40GSVmc?feature=shared
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