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~“bloody sweet”

 
 
 
 
 
“Eat your chocolates, little girl,  
Eat your chocolates!  
Believe me, there’s no metaphysics on earth like chocolates,  
And all religions put together teach no more than the candy shop.  
Eat, dirty little girl, eat!  
If only I could eat chocolates with the same truth as you!  
But I think and, removing the silver paper that’s tinfoil,  
I throw it on the ground, as I’ve thrown out life.)  
     ~ “The Tobacco Shop”, Fernando Pessoa  
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
I bite you in a perfect crunch.. more  
specifically an arousing double crunch  
in a deepening mysterious simultaneity  
of a  
middle sharply cut out clinical note..  
a straight line crisply bite .. with  
a sandwiched borderings.. of an  
overpowering overtone.. a husky  
mellowing down  
an almost muted… yet faintly heard  
alongside.. a smoothly sliding parallel  
& a bit more elongating engagement- this    
submissive- a biscuity wafery thick, a  
melting mouthfeel for quite a while  
 
 
the you..  
in your natural dusky darkened, a timbery  
hard masculinity.. tinted lusciously in richly    
tanning complexions..  from my core i crave  
much this dripping genuine your indigenous  
cocoa.. in a pulling pheromonal sensualities  
..  as you exert your muscling layers .. in your  
peeling off wrappers.. in a drawing magnetic  
nakedness.. with bulging embeds here & there  
of your bundled sturdy packs calling me in .. in  
your flexing embrace caving me in..  
 
 
.. your flavouring ivories.. the aphrodisiacal  
nuttiness bits in an aesthetic embed spread..  
ruthlessly indulges me  as a monstrous love  
avatar .. in a full on biting hard thrills .. in a  
series of acoustical crackling  
addictions..I eat you  
or you make me eat you in your teasers..    
bit shamelessly & voraciously wild.. from this  
my eons n eons of  a hungering love .. in it’s  
an uncompromising rustic purity ..  
 
 
I gaze upon your almondy sharp  
red hot eyes .. as the sacred alloying  
Trishul third eye.. in the making  
 
 
the swords you throw over in the silent airs  
with a sonorously ringing whirring metallic  
whips.. hit my waiting comatose spreads  
in an awakening …  
the ears  are redhot rimmed tightgtened firebud  
awaiting an eruptive climaxing blast … as if  
a deathly evasion..  yet still bravely lustily  
 plateauing over those  
near-climaxing zones forever .. keeping  
your beating strides in a momentum…  
with a spiced up stranglehold  
of my swan neck in a pressure or  
a pleasure?  lock..  releases a riot  
of dire harmonal chaos .. that raises  
me an aerial hippy flexing serpent  
up & above your hanging jaws in the tensed  
up airs .. just reaching your mouth tight..  
feeding you in my aching gushy liquescence  
that has the flavour of your    
kisses & humours-  in a bloody sweet  
the divine densely cacao.. licking wild  
in a killing spree.. taking  
& tucking both .. in & in  & inner  
each of us .. unto  
 
 
the dissolving One depth  
 .. a beautiful Nothingness-  
a non-egotistical love empire  
where you my king  
in a sultry salt-peppery majestic mane  
lure me in your rubbing warm  
ruby & emerald  emery throne  
 
 
you draped in an off white silken  
wrapped turban... lap me in your  
exuding hotness , growling in  
your a  bassy freaking bad ass tone  
in this wilderness of love .. i  
 
 
surrender to your  
Avatar .. donned on your shoulder  
with your eagle messenger .. that  
dares to tear off my skins  
in revelations of my inner  
exuberant Sunning you .. in  
gushing out yellowy slanting  
5ish streams of my core  
in sun lighted  translucencies  
drenching us in this radiance  
 
 
… adding more to this flavour  
are the killer nicotine scents  
of your seducing swallowing mouth  
eating me whole… as the february    
snowy white beds raining on those  
westernly borders of your  
so- far off kingdom  
 
 
.. soothingly cools me  
in the wholly consuming pain  
 you take me in… in moaning  
chants.. of this a wanton  
hunted kill daily ritual  
 
 
i give you my self fully  
until unto this soul core  
in this pain pleasuring  
ecstatically peaking hunt  
… of  the sacrificial flesh n blood    
…. & all the pure metal elemental  
singing to the tunes of  
the endlessly alternating  
deaths & births  
 
 
in   l o v e  
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
P.s:  
For Him.. with love & adorations in all ways, always xx  
 
Also, A tribute to Cocoa .. on this Chocolate day of Valentine day  
 
Also, the poem is bit inspired by #Leo- Tamil film & their musical  numbers - Bloidy Sweet & BadAss - as linked below . A big adoration to Actor Vijay in these numbers… from this diehard fan of him:)  
 
https://youtu.be/qN3wfuPYTI4?feature=shared  
 
https://youtu.be/ZdMZ40GSVmc?feature=shared  
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Written by summultima (uma)
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Author's Note
Just a scribble … a streaming lucid consciousness .. in love .. in all it’s intense intimate dimensions - sensual sexual spiritual  .. n whatever more xx


Title of poem is  borrowed from Song title from Tamil Film “Leo”( 2023 Vijay starter)

Image: is from the same film Leo
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