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Oleander morning skies
coral sands
adrift within molten skies
on petalled canvasses
hand painted
I invented language as light
where as
two ducks swim within
v shaped slow dance
a signifying
dwarf tongue
atoned vespers
tuning forked silence
copyrights © Rianne 2025
all rights reserved
adrift within molten skies
on petalled canvasses
hand painted
I invented language as light
where as
two ducks swim within
v shaped slow dance
a signifying
dwarf tongue
atoned vespers
tuning forked silence
copyrights © Rianne 2025
all rights reserved
Published 8th Feb 2025
Author's Note
picture taken after my morning walk today
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Beautiful! An artistry of skies n earth in petallous lighted silence .. seems all the elements dance in a fusions sync with your bring your soul .. that’s in a singing R xx
9th Feb 2025 2:07pm
Thank you dear Uma, all is singing synched indeed when one can spend a moment engaged with nature, greetings , love and blessings,
Rianne
Rianne
8th Feb 2025 3:12pm
Breathtaking view and what appears to be an encapsulation of silence. I love when I am alone in nature with my thoughts. The Mother seems to craft them in a way I never could. Like this poem.
9th Feb 2025 2:08pm
Thank you dear Ahavati, the best times in nature is to emerge in it and indeed in times exchanged with nature only and alone, greetings, love and blessings,
Rianne
Rianne
8th Feb 2025 9:25pm
9th Feb 2025 2:09pm
Thank you Damian for seeing beauty in this piece, much appreciation! Greetings, love and blessings
Rianne
Rianne
9th Feb 2025 10:01pm
A lovely atmospheric poem and a wonderful image. Norway has some amazing scenery and beauty. A place I would love to visit one day.
10th Feb 2025 6:55am
Thank you kindly VoI or Keith,
For taking the time to visite my pages and leave a thought on this piece. Norway has a lot to offer especially for nature lovers, who knows you might take that trip some day, greetings and blessings,
Rianne
For taking the time to visite my pages and leave a thought on this piece. Norway has a lot to offer especially for nature lovers, who knows you might take that trip some day, greetings and blessings,
Rianne
12th Feb 2025 7:13am
This really blew me away. I read a-lot of good poetry but this is sensational. Each line carefully curated but not losing that soul raw passion and it is such a hard thing to achieve as polishing poetry can leave the poet behind.
Amazing.
Amazing.
12th Feb 2025 12:05pm
Hello Enigma,
Thank you so much for the high praise on this poem and all the kind words. Honored about the nomination!! Have a good day, greetings and blessings,
Rianne
Thank you so much for the high praise on this poem and all the kind words. Honored about the nomination!! Have a good day, greetings and blessings,
Rianne
12th Feb 2025 8:28am
This poem paints a beautiful, surreal landscape with evocative imagery. The blend of nature, art, and quiet contemplation creates a sense of peaceful wonder. The unusual phrasing and juxtapositions make it truly captivating.
12th Feb 2025 12:13pm
Hello Des,
Thank you kindly for your words and reflections on this piece, glad to know you enjoyed the read, greetings and blessings,
Rianne
Thank you kindly for your words and reflections on this piece, glad to know you enjoyed the read, greetings and blessings,
Rianne
