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a walk today

As I inhale fresh air    
beyond quietude    
half way the street    
a sudden flash    
of lightning    
   
I am reminded of old gothic black and white films    
nebulous moments are passing where wild light    
and wind approach me    
   
standing on a balustrade    
I hold on to the railing    
staring into that luminal space    
milky wayed    
   
spirit hands play    
in the milky white sea    
swim snakes    
Medusa shakes her hair    
   
“we are all limbs    
of the same body“    
she says    
as hail hammers down    
   
held by the gaze    
her prospect of darkness    
becomes me  
 
 
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Written by Anne-Ri999
Published | Edited 6th Feb 2025
Author's Note
There is nothing like the crazy Norse weather of the West coast, gotta love it though for it brings all kinds of miraculous moments! You would think this was a black and white image though its not, its just amazing how from almost no colors all can change within an hour or so. During the storm all the colors were gone.
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