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Adorn
Things I've heard
The eyes have seen
In sugar coated
Crystal dreams
Cipher old
High, below
From the top
In-between
Figures shape
Start to form
{My effigy cries a storm}
Adhering to 'The Golden Rules'
My mirror, I adorn
The eyes have seen
In sugar coated
Crystal dreams
Cipher old
High, below
From the top
In-between
Figures shape
Start to form
{My effigy cries a storm}
Adhering to 'The Golden Rules'
My mirror, I adorn
Published 3rd Feb 2025
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3rd Feb 2025 8:17am
Brilliantly penned, Pete. Phenomenal wordplay my friend. I dig this. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
3rd Feb 2025 9:14am
3rd Feb 2025 11:58am
3rd Feb 2025 3:29pm
3rd Feb 2025 3:08pm
hello dearest Pete good morning I really enjoyed this it read like a conjuring or spell 💕 you know mirrors are often used in magic...💕
3rd Feb 2025 3:30pm
3rd Feb 2025 10:20pm
One of the coolest things about poetry is where it takes each reader...regardless of the writer's original intent. This feels cryptic to me but leans in a very specific direction in my funky mind. 🤔
4th Feb 2025 00:38am
I always find that myself Willow haha, different interpretations amongst readers but what I was aiming for was loving yourself ♥️
