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A typical Sunday morning
As I looked into her blackhole,
I knew she needed to use the porcelain thrown
As I waited, I began working on my origami birds
20 minutes later, I heard a swishing, whirlpool like sound coming from the bathroom
She was like, "I'm cuckoo for cocoa puffs"!
"Ok, Let's eat!"
I knew she needed to use the porcelain thrown
As I waited, I began working on my origami birds
20 minutes later, I heard a swishing, whirlpool like sound coming from the bathroom
She was like, "I'm cuckoo for cocoa puffs"!
"Ok, Let's eat!"
Written by
Vision_of_insanity
Published 2nd Feb 2025
Author's Note
For the love vs lies comp
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Re. A typical Sunday morning
2nd Feb 2025 12:54pm
This one is pleasantly crazy. I can't figure this one out.
I think we both have different definitions for her black hole, lol
I think we both have different definitions for her black hole, lol
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Re: Re. A typical Sunday morning
2nd Feb 2025 12:56pm
HAHAHA! Probably. My definition is the dirty one. Literally!
Thanks Debbie. I hope you have some cocoa puffs this am after reading this.
Thanks Debbie. I hope you have some cocoa puffs this am after reading this.
Re. A typical Sunday morning
2nd Feb 2025 12:59pm
Re. A typical Sunday morning
This is getting way too fun .. the comp i mean with the prompt words each talented poets are making out of them , of course with the title in mind ;)
I like this sheerly cos of the cool pleasant vibe as Debbie says above:) & yes the the last line is a nod for me towards the positive love in title . loved the cocoa in reference.. adds to the dark heavenly indulgence . your style with these words n the context is really superbly delivered sx
P.s: discount my comments from the comp POV lol;) standalone, loved this scribe & am happy the prompt words worked magic xx
I like this sheerly cos of the cool pleasant vibe as Debbie says above:) & yes the the last line is a nod for me towards the positive love in title . loved the cocoa in reference.. adds to the dark heavenly indulgence . your style with these words n the context is really superbly delivered sx
P.s: discount my comments from the comp POV lol;) standalone, loved this scribe & am happy the prompt words worked magic xx
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Re: Re. A typical Sunday morning
2nd Feb 2025 3:16pm
It did. I had a blast writing this. Great idea Uma for a comp. Appreciate you. Thanks for the RL.
Re. A typical Sunday morning
2nd Feb 2025 1:54pm
Re: Re. A typical Sunday morning
2nd Feb 2025 3:16pm
Yes it is. Always pry into someone's blackhole. It may amaze or horrify you.
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2nd Feb 2025 5:41pm
Re. A typical Sunday morning
2nd Feb 2025 6:53pm
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2nd Feb 2025 9:20pm
Re. A typical Sunday morning
2nd Feb 2025 11:51pm
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2nd Feb 2025 11:53pm
Re. A typical Sunday morning
3rd Feb 2025 1:09am
Keith I can always count on you to lighten the mood lol 💕good luck in the comp.
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Re: Re. A typical Sunday morning
3rd Feb 2025 10:17am
Re. A typical Sunday morning
3rd Feb 2025 6:47am
Clever write, Keith. Good luck in the competition. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
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Re: Re. A typical Sunday morning
3rd Feb 2025 10:18am
Re. A typical Sunday morning
3rd Feb 2025 7:30pm
Brilliant play on words my friend!
From all the laughter and giggles I would have almost fallen into a black hole! 🤣
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Re: Re. A typical Sunday morning
3rd Feb 2025 7:35pm
I'll throw you a rope and save you. No black holes for you!! Thank you Sappho.