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sadness
within the shadows of the day
contemplating myself and how I relate
with difficulties in relationships
I hold myself accountable
when people hurt my feelings I'm not just mean, I'm vicious
it hurts me later on
there is no taking it back
my anger is dreaded
my Father corrects me
asking me how i want to be
my answer is I don't want to hurt those I love
confessions of the heart
it is distressing how I sometimes behave
depression is setting in, so often I take things personal
my soul should know better
but I feel things so strongly
and I don't know which instinct to go with
setting aside my pride
my apologies are given
Published Yesterday
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Yesterday 4:04am
As someone with a lot of triggers and extra-large emotion (and reactions I wish I didn't have), I feel this. Being able to apologize is noble. Well penned.
Yesterday 4:09am
thank you beautiful Pink one for understanding I had to apologize because I am responsible for how I behave and I'm sure I overreacted I deeply appreciate you sharing your thoughts 💕
Yesterday 7:05am
Dear B,
I found this write especially human.
“contemplating myself and how I relate
with difficulties in relationships
I hold myself accountable”
This stanza has me thinking how vulnerable I can be because I know only too well how open I leave myself.
I really appreciated the depth of emotion in this piece. H🌷
I found this write especially human.
“contemplating myself and how I relate
with difficulties in relationships
I hold myself accountable”
This stanza has me thinking how vulnerable I can be because I know only too well how open I leave myself.
I really appreciated the depth of emotion in this piece. H🌷
Yesterday 7:16am
We are all our own best friends and worst enemies. And more so with passionate people. A very relatable write 🌼
Yesterday 11:51am
Can relate. Well said poem. You're honesty shines bright Brenda. xo
Yesterday 12:26pm
We must keep our prids when we deal with mean things, and react spntanesously on the fly lest we might develop depressive behavior later,
Anyway; thats my way how to deal with people and unespected situations, and i feel healthy, optimistic,no depressed, even peiople value the way i live and deal with them...''while it hurts, it will surely cure''
Very well written Crimsin.Hamid
Anyway; thats my way how to deal with people and unespected situations, and i feel healthy, optimistic,no depressed, even peiople value the way i live and deal with them...''while it hurts, it will surely cure''
Very well written Crimsin.Hamid
There are times I will react in anger/rage and say things that people will have to pull me back from saying. We are all human's with emotions and reactions that may or may not be what other people like or expect but it does happen.
Saying sorry is big and it does take a lot to say it when meant whole heartedly. But you should not say sorry when your feeling are hurt by someone. I used to do that and I felt worse because I was hurt, why cant they say sorry to me?
Very open piece Brenda xoxo
Saying sorry is big and it does take a lot to say it when meant whole heartedly. But you should not say sorry when your feeling are hurt by someone. I used to do that and I felt worse because I was hurt, why cant they say sorry to me?
Very open piece Brenda xoxo
Yesterday 6:26pm
As wordsmiths we need to always be aware of the incredible damage our words can do. Intentionally or otherwise. It's a very thin rope but holding ourselves accountable for our own actions is the best us we can give the world. Brava, Brenda ❤️
