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M-F
Another day dawns
And I'm propped up
Like a pale corpse
To lead charge into battle
Pushed and berated on
A beast of burden
With no reprieve
From bound shackles
Sent home a shell
To my loves
A broken boned
Fading soul
And I'm propped up
Like a pale corpse
To lead charge into battle
Pushed and berated on
A beast of burden
With no reprieve
From bound shackles
Sent home a shell
To my loves
A broken boned
Fading soul
Published 2nd Feb 2025
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2nd Feb 2025 8:52am
Hello,
I thought you had gathered some really nice lines here,the image of the pale corps seems a good one to me as an opening, the bound shackles and the closure, esp the last stanza, Greetings,
Rianne
I thought you had gathered some really nice lines here,the image of the pale corps seems a good one to me as an opening, the bound shackles and the closure, esp the last stanza, Greetings,
Rianne
2nd Feb 2025 12:24pm
