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When Fake Outshines The Truth
Hoof-printed trails speak of goats, sheeps and livestock herds,and the small pawprints of sloughi left behind..easily recognized.I take the route daily trodden, the way of my thoughts to browse the forest woods, and the mountain rocks...
overwhelmed with mundane vocabulary, idle speeches,vain chatting, the brain is about to collapse into fruitless abyss,dehydrated, i skip into the forest woods, the open lands, open their hands to my muse, fuel my heart with the most truthful feelings, the mountain is silently friendly and warm...
...
The wilderness is wise and tranquil seen thru' the eye of the heavenly quill.
that dips its tip into the rocky ponds and the mountain lakes.lines written with sky rains, and natural feathers....genuinely and trutfully transmitted without altering
a word or translating a theme thru dehumanized flawed vocabulary........
Man is yet to be wise like a wild animal, living in the wilderness. his civilized acts tell nothing but savagery, cruelty and sadism. turning man into a dead corpse, or may be a stringed dummy..
It's time to follow the wild right in the woods and desert mountains;in the jungle
to lean the abc's of ethical behaviour...."spontaneity and innocence.."
Real books are not AI generated on Nature's shelf, nor plagiarized
without shame or honour, the human flaws must be seen in humans creation,
taken right from dust and water, from spontaneous feelings under god's
creation, inspired to impress the human heart and tell the other fakers that natural creation without man's flaws withou human tripping mistakes, is as dead as a word taken from a robot mouth...
https://youtu.be/0RLHJRku3fU?t=2383
overwhelmed with mundane vocabulary, idle speeches,vain chatting, the brain is about to collapse into fruitless abyss,dehydrated, i skip into the forest woods, the open lands, open their hands to my muse, fuel my heart with the most truthful feelings, the mountain is silently friendly and warm...
...
The wilderness is wise and tranquil seen thru' the eye of the heavenly quill.
that dips its tip into the rocky ponds and the mountain lakes.lines written with sky rains, and natural feathers....genuinely and trutfully transmitted without altering
a word or translating a theme thru dehumanized flawed vocabulary........
Man is yet to be wise like a wild animal, living in the wilderness. his civilized acts tell nothing but savagery, cruelty and sadism. turning man into a dead corpse, or may be a stringed dummy..
It's time to follow the wild right in the woods and desert mountains;in the jungle
to lean the abc's of ethical behaviour...."spontaneity and innocence.."
Real books are not AI generated on Nature's shelf, nor plagiarized
without shame or honour, the human flaws must be seen in humans creation,
taken right from dust and water, from spontaneous feelings under god's
creation, inspired to impress the human heart and tell the other fakers that natural creation without man's flaws withou human tripping mistakes, is as dead as a word taken from a robot mouth...
https://youtu.be/0RLHJRku3fU?t=2383
Published 1st Feb 2025
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1st Feb 2025 12:45pm
This poem is a powerful critique of the artificial and superficial aspects of modern life, contrasted with the wisdom, tranquility, and authenticity of the natural world.
1st Feb 2025 1:43pm
Modern life is but fake existence, no raw feelings, no genuine
speaking, no true poetry....and people seem satisfied !!!
i think i am dreaming, not yet awoken to the sad reality..
Thank you my friend for your strong comment..
Have good times and be blessed. Hamid
speaking, no true poetry....and people seem satisfied !!!
i think i am dreaming, not yet awoken to the sad reality..
Thank you my friend for your strong comment..
Have good times and be blessed. Hamid
1st Feb 2025 3:32pm
To go back in time to the wilderness is a thought. It was not always tranquil, but I do see the peacefulness of this. Modern life is a different wilderness and to navigate is a trial
Man is not the one thought to be by all the religions and great people.
The more he gows up in tech, the more he goes down in Ethics,
there must be laws and regulations to put ends to his levity, and vanity...
Nature, in its raw existence offers the main lines of a well behaved life, not from prey and hunter
but from harmony in life and frequencies of each being living within....
Anyway, hope that man turns back to his original humanity and behave like such before his own destruction..
Thank You Fia, you are always such a nice poetess and an objective critic ever..Hamid
The more he gows up in tech, the more he goes down in Ethics,
there must be laws and regulations to put ends to his levity, and vanity...
Nature, in its raw existence offers the main lines of a well behaved life, not from prey and hunter
but from harmony in life and frequencies of each being living within....
Anyway, hope that man turns back to his original humanity and behave like such before his own destruction..
Thank You Fia, you are always such a nice poetess and an objective critic ever..Hamid
7th Feb 2025 9:03pm
Frustration and bitterness are spilled into a Nature Lover intense ink displaying a Humanity lost in alienation flooded with artificial information.. Living creatures with blurred vision.. blinded sight.. removed roots.. If only we could regain our genuine voice and feel of humanity.. If only we could go back to our Mother Nature smell its earth and rinse all that is fake with its rain.. Let’s hope and pray.. Thank you so much for sharing and raising a genuine poetic voice and a true ink.. Stay always blessed..
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Fasting Ramadhan and more home business did really take their toll on being under stomach sickness
thanks again
thanks my smile for your sweet feedback, apology again;
Fasting Ramadhan and more home business did really take their toll on being under stomach sickness
thanks again
